Question

英语作文 一篇关于了解学校的课外活动情况

活动时间：4.50-5.50p.m
主要内容。 周一、周三：图书阅览；篮球、足球、其它体育项目。周二：兴趣小组(interest gro：电脑、绘画、歌舞、制作。周五：英语角。
你的建议：增加课外活动时间。减少作业量。
是一个美国老师来了解学校的课外活动，所以要以他的角度论述。

Answer 1

Our school's extracurricular activities is very wonderful. Let me tell you some about it.
Our school's extracurricular activities is bewteen 4:50 and 5:50.On Monday and Wednesday, we have reading in library. We can know a lot of knowledge from it.We also have some sports such as basketball、football and so on. On Tuesday, we have interest grade. For example, we have playing computer grade, painting grade, dancing grade. making grade and so on.
It's so interesting. On Friday,we hold a English Corner. From it, we can make a lot of friends with other and learn a lot that how to sqeak with each other.
In our free time, we should attend a lot of extracurricular activities. Don't do a lot of homework at home. Maybe do a lot of extracurricular activities are better than do a lot of homework at home.
不知道符不符合你的要求

Answer 2

my suggestions are to add the time of the activity and to diminish the homework.