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帮忙写篇英语作文

假如你是李明，收到英国爱丁堡大学（Edinburgh University）的入学通知书，准备今年九月赴英留学。现在请你给该校宿舍管理处（Student Accommodation Office）写封邮件，请他们帮你联系住宿，你的要求如下：1 寄宿在英国家庭，方便交流及提高英语。2 有卧房与起居室兼用的房间（bed-sitter），每周75英镑。3 其他要求…，开头是 I am a Chinese student . I have received a letter from your university to accept me as an overseas student.100到120词

Answer 1

I am a Chinese student . I have received a letter from your university to accept me as an overseas student.im so happy cause i have longing it for so long time. i will come to your university to start my study at september.,but i have no idea about where i live .would u please accommodate me with some england family? it helps me to improve my english if i always stay with local people even when im home,and it will do good for my study also if i improved my english .i dont want the lauguage become an obstacle both in my study and life. And i would like to live in a bed-sitter room ,with the rent will be at 75 pound per week if possible. if u can find and arrange such a place as near to school as possible,it will be perfect ! A big thank for your reading and help.
Best regards for u !

your sincerely Ming Li

我亲手写的啊,,看过了觉得行.别忘了采纳我为最佳的,以帮助我升级啊 呵呵.

Answer 2

To whom it may concern:

Hello, My name is Li ming, and my student ID number is XXXXXXX(如果有), I am so glad I received a letter from your univeristy to accept me as an international student, and I will report to you around september of this year. As an international student, the most concern I have right now is accommoation. so , could you please arrange accommodation for me by the time I get there? I would much appreciate if these three requests are considered while you are finding lodging for me. First, accommodate me into a English family so that I can improve my English (English family with beautiful girl is a plus); second, bedsitting room is a plus. and about 75/week rent. third, other request............... Hopefully, it won't take too much time for you to find it. Once again. I appreciate all the help you provide! God bless you.
Regards
信开头最好写你的名字和学生证号，以便那边学校职员知道是谁写来的信。

Answer 3

GOOD

Answer 4

寄宿家庭每周收费在150磅以上吧