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谁能帮我把这篇英文文章改改，谢谢 下面是中文，我是机器翻译的，语法不正确

Giving presentations in English: challenges and solutions
As a college student, entering school English speech, for me, really can have certain pressure, firstly because from my contact is Chinese, for this kind of new form of speech hard to avoid can feel uncertain, secondly because speech is a training opportunities, so I valued this form of speech, I hope I can do, so that they will inevitably cause certain pressure.
Although I'm not sure that my English could take this speech deductive is wonderful, but I think it is a to own challenges and beyond. Life is because have repeatedly challenge to constantly see their potential to the place, only then can see their own value, and so am I. After years of high school English learning, I have the certain English foundation, in the university; I still need to take it constantly ascension so that I can get of continuous progress.
This speech just gave me a continuous self-improvement, I will pass this opportunity, to learn and contact more knowledge of English, contact with every day some speech may use the words and phrases, and carefully remember them, will also go experienced seniors learn elder sisters go scriptures, through their experience and experience, to better improve my speech.
Through a period of learning and accumulation, and I'll put you want to express, with the most perfect manner, also can not in their master's words, timely consult teachers and classmates, until you understand so far. Hope that through this training opportunities, can let me enhance English speech ability, can deeper understanding to the English unique charm, and in later speeches constantly train, let oneself again breakthrough.
作为一名刚刚入学的大学生，英语演讲，对我来说，确实会有一定的压力，第一是因为自己从小接触的是汉语，对于这种新形式的演讲难免会感到没有把握，第二是因为演讲是一次锻炼机会，所以我很重视这种形式的演讲，我希望我可以做好，这样就难免会造成一定的压力。
虽然我不确信自己的英语水平能否把这次的演讲演绎的很精彩，但是我认为，这是一次对自己的挑战和超越。人生就是因为有了一次次的挑战才能够不断的看到自己的潜力所在，才能够看到自己的价值，我也如此。经历了多年的中学英文学习，我拥有了一定的英文基础，在大学里，我还需要把它不断的提升，这样我才可以得到不断的进步。
这次的演讲正好给了我一个不断自我提升的机会，我会通过这样一个机会，去学习和接触更多英语知识，每天接触一些演讲中可能会用到的单词和词句，并且用心记住他们，也会去向有经验的学长学姐们去取经，通过他们的体会和心得，来更好的完善自己的演讲。
通过一段时间的学习和积累，我会把自己想要表达的，用最完美的方式表达出来，也会在自己没有把握的词句上，及时的请教老师和同学，直到自己理解为止。希望通过这样的锻炼机会，可以让我增强英文演讲的能力，可以更深的领悟到英文独特的的魅力，并且在以后的演讲中不断锻炼自己，让自己一次又一次的突破。

Answer 1

如果把中文翻译成英文：
第一种：As a newly enrolled students, English speaking, for me, really there will be some pressure, because she was very young the first contact with the Chinese, for this new form of speech will inevitably feel not sure, and the second is Because speech is a training opportunity, so I value this form of speech, I hope I can do, so will inevitably cause some pressure. Although I'm not sure my English speaking ability to perform this very exciting, but I think this is a challenge and go beyond their own. Life is because of the challenge again and again to be able to continue to see their potential for to be able to see their value, I also do so. After years of high school English learning, I have some foundation in English in college, I also need to keep improving it, so I can get continuous progress. The speech just gave me a chance to upgrade themselves continuously, I would pass such an opportunity to learn and to reach more knowledge of English on a daily basis may be used in a number of speech of words and phrases, and hard to remember They also experienced seniors whereabouts of their sister school to learn, through their experience and expertise, to better improve their own speech. Through a period of learning and accumulation, I would want to express themselves, with the most perfect mode of expression, will also not sure in their own words, and timely consult teachers and students, until he understood so far. Hope that through this training opportunity to enhance my ability to speak English, can be a deeper insight into the unique charm of English and speech in the future continue to exercise yourself to break through again and again.
第二种：The university student who just entered a school as one, English lectures, for me, truly will have certain pressure, first will be because will contact since childhood will be Chinese, will feel unavoidably regarding this new form's lecture has not grasped, second will be because the lecture will be an exercise opportunity, therefore I will take this form very much the lecture, I hoped that I may complete, unavoidably will like this create certain pressure. Although I did not believe firmly that own English proficiency is very whether splendid this time lecture deduction, but I believed that this is one time to own challenge and surmounting. The life is because had a challenge only then to be able unceasing to see own potential were, only then could see own value, I also so. Has experienced many year middle school English study, I had certain English foundation, in the university, I also needs its unceasing promotion, I only then to be possible to obtain like the unceasing progress. This time lecture has happen to given me an unceasing self-promotion opportunity, I through this kind of opportunity, will study and the contact more English knowledge, every day will contact the word which and the words and phrases in some lectures will possibly use, and will remember them attentively, also will meet the whereabouts experienced school leader study elder sisters to learn from experienced people, through theirs experience and the attainment, will come better consummation own lecture. Through a period of time's study and the accumulation, I my wish expression, will express with the most perfect way, also in oneself will not have grasped in the words and phrases, prompt will consult teacher and schoolmate, until own understanding. The hope through such exercise opportunity, may let me strengthen English lecture ability, may the deeper comprehension English unique charm, and exercises itself unceasingly in the later lecture, lets the breakthrough time and time again.
英文翻译成中文：第一种：给英语演讲：挑战与解决方案作为一名大学生，进入学校的英语演讲对我来说，真的有一定的压力，首先是因为从我的接触是中国对这种言论难免会感到一种不确定的新形式，其次是因为讲话，是一个培训的机会，所以我重视这种形式的言论，我希望我能做到，让他们将不可避免地造成一定的压力。虽然我不知道，我的英语可以借此讲话演绎是美好的，但我认为这是对自己的挑战和超越。生命是因为有多次挑战不断地看到他们的潜力的地方，才可以看到自己的价值，还有我在高一学年英语学习，我有一定的英语基础，在大学，我仍然需要把它不断提升，使我能不断进步。这个讲话只是给了我一个不断自我改进，我将通过这个机会，学习和接触更多的英语知识，每天都要接触的一些讲话可以使用单词和短语，并仔细记住他们也将会大大有经验的前辈学习姐姐走经文，通过他们的经验和经验，更好地提高我的发言。通过一段时间的学习和积累，我会给你想要表达的，用最完美的方式，也不能与他们的主人的话，及时咨询教师和同学，直到你明白为止。希望通过这次培训机会，可以让我提高英语演讲能力，可以更深入了解英语的独特魅力，并在以后的发言中不断培养，让自己再次突破。
第二种：给介绍用英语： 挑战和解答作为大学生，输入的学校英国讲话，我的，可能真正地有某一压力，首先，因为从我的联络是汉语，为了这种避免的艰苦讲话的新的形式能感到不定，第二，因为讲话是训练机会，因此我重视了讲话的这个形式，我希望我可以做，因此他们将不可避免地导致某一压力。虽然I' 我的英国可能采取演绎这的讲话的m不肯定是美妙，但是我认为它是a对自己的挑战和外面。 生活是，因为一再有挑战经常看他们的潜力到地方，能那时看到他们自己的价值，和，因此上午i。 在几年高中英国学会以后，我有某一英国基础，在大学; 我仍然需要经常采取它上生，以便我可以得到连续的进展。这讲话给了我一个连续的自我改善，我将通过这个机会，学会和与英语联系更多知识，与每天的联络一些讲话也许使用词和词组和小心地记住他们，也将去老练的前辈学会姐姐审阅圣经，他们的经验和经验，更好改进我的讲话。通过学会和储积的期间和I' ll投入了您想要表达，与最完善的方式，也不能在他们的master' s词，实时性咨询老师和同学，到目前为止，直到您了解。 通过这训练机会希望那，能让我提高英国讲话能力，经常能更加深刻的理解对英国独特的魅力和在最新讲话火车，再让自己突破。
由此可见，你翻译的的确有错，录取我中译英二种中的一种吧！！

Answer 2

Giving presentations in English: challenges and solutions
As a fresh college student, presenting in English publicly is quite some pressure for me. Firstly since my mother tongue is Chinese, I am not too sure about such new form of speech. Secondly I see public speaking as a valuable pportunity to practice and hope to do well in it, so that inevitably causes certain pressure.
Although I'm not certain whether my English is good enough to make this speech wonderful, I think it challenges me to go beyond. Life reveals us our true potential and value by giving us one challenge after another. This is true about me too. After years of learning English in the middle school, I have laid certain foundation. Now that I'm in college, I still need to improve it continuously so that I can progress continuously.
This speech has given me a good opportunity to do it. I will take this opportunity to learn and expose myself to more knowledge of English, accumulate the words and phrasese I might use in the speech every day and learn them by heart, and also find more experienced senirs to learntheir lessons so as to do my speech better.
Through some time of learning and accumulation, I'll express my thoughts in the best way possible and also learn from teachers and colleagues about things I'm not certain until I master them. I hope to improve my English speaking skills through such practices and also to appreciate the beauty of the English language to a greater extent. I will also improve myself in future speeches to achieve one breakthrough after another.

Answer 3

英译中
用英语做讲演:挑战与解决方案
作为一名大学生,进入学校英语演讲,对我来说,真的会有一定的压力,首先因为从我的联系方式是中国人,这种新形式的演讲难免会感到不确定,第二是因为的演讲就是一个培训机会,所以我看好了这形式的讲话,我希望我能做了,所以他们不可避免地会造成一定的压力。
虽然我不知道我的英语能把这句话演绎是了不起的,但我认为它是一个对自己的挑战和超越。生活是因为一再挑战,不断地看他们的潜力的地方,只有这样才能看到自己的价值,我也很高兴。经过多年的高中英语学习,我有一定的英文基础,在大学,我还是需要把它不断提升,这样我就可以不断的进步。
这句话只是给了我一个不断改进,我会将这个机会,学习和联系多点的英语知识,每天接触一些演说可能使用的单词和短语,并小心地记住他们,也会有经验的长者姐经典,去学习通过经验和经验,在提高我的言语。
通过一段时间的学习与积累,我会把你想表达,拥有最完美的方式,也不可以为他们的主人的话,及时咨询的老师和同学,直到你到目前为止都懂。希望通过这次的培训机会,可以让我提高英语语言能力,能深入理解英语的独特魅力,在以后的演讲中不断锻炼自己,让自己又突破。

中译英
As a college student, entering school English speech, for me, really can have certain pressure, firstly because from their contact is Chinese, for this kind of new form of speech hard to avoid can feel uncertain, secondly because speech is a training opportunities, so I valued this form of speech, I hope I can do, so that they will inevitably cause certain pressure.
Although I'm not sure that my English could take this speech deductive is wonderful, but I think it is a to own challenges and beyond. Life is because have repeatedly challenge to constantly see their potential to the place, only then can see their own value, and so am I. After years of high school English learning, I have the certain English foundation, in the university, I still need to take it constantly ascension so that I can get of continuous progress.
This speech just gave me a continuous self-improvement, I will pass this opportunity, to learn and contact more knowledge of English, contact with every day some speech may use the words and phrases, and carefully remember them, will also go experienced seniors learn elder sisters go scriptures, through their experience and experience, to better improve his speech.
Through a period of learning and accumulation, and I'll put you want to express, with the most perfect manner, also can not in their master's words, timely consult teachers and classmates, until you understand so far. Hope that through this training opportunities, can let me enhance English speech ability, can deeper understanding to the English unique charm, and in later speeches constantly train, let oneself again breakthrough.

Answer 4

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