Question

跪求高手用英文翻译一下，谢谢了！

看到您的好消息，我非常高兴，这是我的一个好开端，好成绩的取得离不开我的努力，更离不开您课上的精彩讲授和对我的关心和帮助，在此对您表示我最衷心的感谢

Answer 1

应该说以上的四个译文中 lemmenqin 的最好，只是还有些问题，修改如下：
gald 改为 glad (拼写错误)
see...news 最好改成learn...news (消息可以获悉，所以与learn搭配. 不能用see)
your great care shown on me 改为 your great care shown for me （应该说care for sb.）
I am very appreciated to you. 改为 I am very grateful to you. （可说I appreciate your help. 我感激你的帮助。不可说be appreciated to sb.）
修改的全文： I am so glad to learn the good news of you.This is a good start for me.Good marks depend on my hard work, your excellent lectures and your great care shown for me.Therefore, I am very grateful to you.

Answer 2

See your good news, I'm very happy, this is one of my good start, a good result obtained without my efforts, more from you. Class wonderful lectures and to my care and help, in this to you express my heartfelt thanks

Answer 3

i am so glad to receive this news , which symbolises a good start for me . what i have got is the fruit of my hard work and your marvellous teaching and favor , i express my deep appreciation to you here

Answer 4

I‘m so glad for the good news. This is a good start for me. The good result is inseparable from my efforts, as well as your wonderful teaching and your concern and help to me. I express my great appreciation to you.

Answer 5

I'm glad to hear your good news. It was a sign for my successful beginning. Granted, I could not have achieve such high grade if I had not worked so hard. Not to mention, the most significant contribution was your vivid lecture and your benevolent concerning and altruistic help.
My sincere appreciation,
(write down your name here)