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雅思小作文 怎么写

雅思小作文 怎么写

Answer 1

你好，很高兴为你解答：
小作文我给你提供G类的信件写法：
G类作文Task 1
Letter writing基本要求：
1) You are suggested to spend about 20 minutes on Task 1 and are required to write at least 150 words.
2) You do not need to write the Address and the date unless they are required.
写作格式：
段首顶格，段间空行。
信件分类：
Formal letters:
formal impersonal letter(business letter) 正式非私人信件（商业信件）
除去签名，所有内容打印。
formal personal letter 正式私人信件 like invitations, requests, arrangements, apology, congratulations, thanks...
最大的目的，就是get things done.
而an informal letter 非正式信件
（最大的错误是混淆问题，正式信件和非正式信件不分。）
雅思考试通常是正式信件，现代的正式信件不一定要求全是正式的语言，只要求避免缩写，俚语和习语即可。
写作模式：
1) In the introduction paragraph, First you should engage in personal correspondence; then you should tell the reader the background of the letter (elicit and provide general factual information) and why you write the letter.
2) In the body, you should express needs, wants, likes and dislikes or express your views or complaints.
Attention: answer the question without straying from the topic.
3) You need appropriate ending for your letter.

最大技巧：
写作的通用技巧就是句型技巧，所有在课堂曾经出现过的句型都可以做为模板句型带入。
Let's take a sample writing as an example.
A friend of yours has written to tell you that he/she is coming to spend two weeks in your hometown. Unfortunately you will be late to meet him/her at the airport because you have something important to do.
Write a letter to your friend and explain why you will be late. Suggest something for him/her to do until you arrive.
抱歉：
Unfortunately
I am sorry for sth
I have to apologize that …
1 在要求部分画下所有重要点。
Write a letter to your friend and explain why you will be late. Suggest something for him/her to do until you arrive.
Would you like to wait in the KFC and I will call you when I arrive.
What about waiting for me in the KFC, and I will try my best to get there earlier.
2 在背景下面画下所有要点。
A friend of yours has written to tell you that he/she is coming to spend two weeks in your hometown. Unfortunately you will be late to meet him/her at the airport because you have something important to do.
3 决定称呼语写法。
Dear Peter,
Bill Gates
Jack Welch
Jennifer Aniston
Britney Spears

Dear Mr / Ms (Ms.)
Miss Mrs
Bill Gates / B. Gates / Gates (Mr. Tom)
Mr Tom Bill

Sir or Madam,

4 从下面内容中，勾去不需要的内容。
* Self-introduction (no need to introduce ourselves to a friend)
I am Rachel Green, a nurse working in GreenHill Hospital.
Pleasantries（客套）(appropriate when writing to a friend)
I am asking you to do me a favor.
We have not seen each other since last student reunion in Los Angeles.
Beijing Shanghai

Information (we will be late and why)

* Inquiry (No such need)
Would you please inform me / tell me …?
Please tell me / update me ….
Request (Suggest what to do)
I would be very much appreciated if you could …
Please do …
I am writing to do … (complain for the injury caused by a accident in your supermarket. )
* Persuasion (No such need)
5 从客套语开始
I was very happy to receive your letter and…
Thank you for the letter dated 17th Mar.
英式表达是：日月年
11th 1st 31st 21st
12th 2nd 22nd
3rd 13th 23rd
th
6 接下去是背景介绍
In this case, the background is that your friend is coming to visit you. Since our pleasantries took only one sentence, we can put pleasantries and background in the same paragraph.

… to hear that you will soon come to ChengDu. I really look forward to spending some time with you and I am sure that we well have a lot of things to say to each other.
I am really looking forward to doing / n.
7 接下来写主题
Unfortunately, though, I have an important exam just on the day of your arrival. That means that I will not be able to come to the airport on time. While I apologize for that, I will not keep you waiting for long: your flight arrives at 3:00 PM, and my exam also ends at 3:00. Of course I will come straight to the airport and it should not take me more than 45 minutes.
8 最后写要求，这里是建议
There is a bar at the airport called Sky Lounge. Would you mind waiting for me there and have a drink or two until I can come and meet you? I hope you do not mind.
9 结尾加上标准的结尾客套话
I really look forward to seeing you.
10 签名
Your friend Paul

最终产品：
Dear Peter,

I was very happy to receive your letter and to hear that you will soon come to ChengDu. I really look forward to spending some time with you and I am sure that we will have a lot of things to say to each other.

Unfortunately, though, I have an important exam just on the day of your arrival. That means that I will not be able to come to the airport on time. While I apologize for that, I will not keep you waiting for long: your flight arrives at 3:00 PM, and my exam also ends at 3:00. Of course I will come straight to the airport and it should not take me more than 45 minutes.

There is a bar at the airport called Sky Lounge. Would you mind waiting for me there and have a drink or two until I can come and meet you? I hope you do not mind.

I really look forward to seeing you.

Your friend Paul

Yours sincerely,
Paul

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am Jennifer Aniston, a nurse working in GreenHill Hospital. I am writing to complain about an injury caused by an accident happened in your supermarket in the afternoon on 17th March and I hope measures should be taken to prevent further similar accidents.

Slip on the wet floor
twist my ankle
broke my arm

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Answer 2

我上的是新奇雅思的写作课，很不错，你可以去了解了解

Answer 3

写作文不是一朝一息的事，需要自己的努力和名师的指点，不妨报个培训班学习下，会提高的很快。请关注世纪雅思官网。

Answer 4

主要就是对图表的描述，写作是需要多加的练习的，新奇的写作老师很棒的，你可以去看看

Answer 5

小作文就是背模板，买本参考书把各种柱状图线形图饼状图什么的模式背下来就行，到时候套就好

Answer 6

如果不是很有把握，报个培训班还是值得考虑的