Question

请帮我看一下我写的英语作文有没有语法错误，O(∩_∩)O谢谢3

还有作业只要求120个词，我写的大概有180个词，超出很多，高手有办法也顺便帮我缩一下

Answer 1

As far as I am concerned, to live a healthy life, we should first pay much attention to a balanced diet.【去掉as we are what we eat】. 【Having】 regular 【exercises】 and 【getting】enough sleep are 【also important to our healthy bodies.】Besides, stress is absolutely an enemy of our health, we 【we need to know ways to relax ourselves in heavy workloads. [relax与所提及的stress是相对的解决方法，不要单纯简单地用get rid.]】

【In my point of view, the way my classmates lived isn’t a healthy way for us to follow.】They often have some 【snacks during break time [课间用break time表示]】. What's worse, they 【always busy】 in 【studying till midnight.】 【They are lacking of sleep and physical exercises】. 【All above lead to their unhealthy bodies.】

As a senior student, I think it is 【not】 important 【but】 necessary for us to live a healthy life. So it is the high time for us to say no to 【those】 unhealthy ways of living. 【去掉And】I wish my schoolmates could understand the importance of good health and live a healthy life 【as soon as possible】.

希望回答对你有帮助，也可对比参照一下其他人观点

Answer 2

stree前要定冠词the.
直到很晚这样说比较好untill midnight
it is high time we say no to...这是固定句式it is high time that sb do sth或者it is high time to do sth

Answer 3

图看不清啊~~~