Question

请各位大虾看一下哪个翻译更准确（没有语法错误）

大家好，我是一个活泼开朗、喜爱交友的阳关女孩。我非常喜欢动物，尤其是兔子和海豚。我会弹钢琴，从小到大，我获过许多奖状，如今已经十级了。我年年都是“三好学生”、“诵读明星”。我热爱集体，团结友爱。在老师眼里，我是得力的小帮手，在同学眼里，我是他们的好伙伴，在爸爸妈妈眼里，我是他们心中的乖乖女，在爷爷奶奶眼里，我是他们贴心的小棉袄。这就是我，你看好我吗？
Hello everybody, I am a lively, cheerful, like the girl friend of Yang Guan. I love animals, especially rabbits and dolphins. I play the piano, from small to large, I have been many awards, and now ten of the. I have every year are "good student", "read star." I love collective solidarity. The teacher's eyes, I was capable little helper, the students eyes, I am their good partner in the eyes of my parents, my little girl in their hearts, in the eyes of my grandparents, I was their intimate cotton jacket. This is me, you promising me?

Hello everyone, i'm a lively、bright and like make friends sunshine girl. I like animals, especially rabbit and dolphin. I can play the piano.I have got many awards, Now i got the level 10. I'm the Excellent student and the reading star every year. I love collective and solidarity. i'm a good helper for teacher ,i'm a good buddy as my class mates and i'm a lively girl for my parents also to my grandfather and grandma .
This is me. Do you agree with me( do you like me)?

Hello,everyone,I am a loving sunny girl. I love make friends as well.i love animals,especially for rabbit and dophine. i can play piano in my early age.what is more ,i get many awards,luckyily,i have been in the level of the 10 grade.Every year ,i am the best student in my class.I am the star of reading.I Love my chassand my classmate.IN my teacher's eyes,i am a perfect helper,while,in my classmate's eye's ,i am the best companion.Most importantly,Iam a loving daughter parent's mind ,meanwhile,i am a warm clothes in my grandparent's hearts.THIS is me.DO you like me?If so,let us sudy hard.

Answer 1

第二种、第三种，各有不足和优势。原因：
①从标点符号可看出，hello与everyone 之间要打逗号，前面两种都没有、
②从阳光女孩的翻译可以看出，第一种纯属中文翻译法，第二种没有注意语序，且语法错误，定于成句未用which连接。而第三种用分句把要表达的意思完整正确的表达出来了、
③第二种的最后一句，Do you agree with me,用的很好。属于英译法，有适当转换。把你看好我吗，很自然地译了过来.第三种其次。第一种最麻烦且生词多.
④第三种的i在句首普遍没有大写，而第二种注意的较好。

Answer 2

很多错误，中式英语。

Answer 3

第二个是翻译的最好的~

英语翻译专业出身，希望可以帮到你，过年快乐~

Answer 4

第三个好一些，修改如下
Hello,everyone,I am a lovely and sunny girl. I love to make friends and love animals as well,especially rabbit and dophine. i can play the piano in my early age.what is more ,i get many awards,luckily,i have been in the level of the 10 grade.Every year I'm the best student and the star of reading in my class I love my class and classmates. In my teacher's eyes,i am a perfect helper,while in my classmates's eye's ,i am the best companion.Most importantly,I'm a good daughter in parent's mind ,meanwhile good granddaughter in my grandparent's hearts.This is me.Do you like me? If so,let us study hard.

Answer 5

简单来说都有语法错误，比如like (或love)+ 动词ing形式就是很好的例子
我对最后一项稍作了修改，你看一下。
Hello,everyone,I am a lovely sunny girl. I like to make friends. i like animals very much, especially rabbits and dophines. I can play piano well. I learnt it since I was young, and I got many awards. Now I got Level10 of piano playing. I am the "Three Good Student" "Reading Star" of my class every year.I Love my class, and I love to help with others.From my teacher's view,I am a helpful assistant. While as in my classmates eyes, I am the best companion.Most importantly,I am a clever daughterin my parents mind. And I warm my grandparents hearts.THIS is me. What do you think of me?

Answer 6

Hello,everyone,I am a lovely and sunny girl. I love to make friends and love animals as well,especially rabbit and dophine. i can play the piano in my early age.what is more ,i get many awards,luckily,i have been in the level of the 10 grade.Every year I'm the best student and the star of reading in my class I love my class and classmates. In my teacher's eyes,i am a perfect helper,while in my classmates's eye's ,i am the best companion.Most importantly,I'm a good daughter in parent's mind ,meanwhile good granddaughter in my grandparent's hearts.This is me.Do you like me? If so,let us study hard.