Question

一道高中英语短文改错题

One afternoon after I was on my way home,the weather changed suddenly.Dark clouds were gathered. I began to feel worried because I didn't have both a raincoat or
umbrella about me. It soon started to rain. Just as I was hurrying home, I heard of someone calling me from behind. I turn to have a look and found that he was Liu Wei,
a good neighbor of mine. he offered to share his umbrella with me. We walked all the ways home. With his help, I wound have got wet to the skin, How thankful I was to his help!
找出上面短文中的十处错误，只涉及一个单词的增加/删除或修改。

Answer 1

我找到了十处，不知道对不对，但我把理由说出来吧，这样我错了你也可以帮我纠正哈
1，after 改为when，连词误用，这是根据句意判断的，当我在回家的路上，而且when i was doing/was about to ,sth v-ed.是个常用的句型，意思是，当我正做什么的时候什么事发生了。
2,were删去，语态误用，这里云是注定聚在一起的。
3，both改为neither， 副词误用，这里是个固定搭配，既没有什么也没有什么。
4,unbrella前加a，成分残缺，这里and连接的是两个并列成分，后面用了a前面也要用，而且伞是可数的
5，soon改为soonly，副词误用，这里soon修饰的是start，应用副词
6,calling前加was，成分残缺，这里差一个be动词。
7,turn改为turned，时态误用，全文都是一般过去式，所以这里也要用一般过去式。
8，he 改为it，代词不当，当指代不知道的人是应该用It
9,ways改为way，名词误用，回家的路上时way home。
10,to改为on，介词误用，身体上的一部分前加介词on

Answer 2

One afternoon after （换成 when, 当---得时候） I was on my way home,the weather changed suddenly.Dark clouds were （去掉 were, 主动时态） gathered. I began to feel worried because I didn't have both（换成either，两个中的否定用either) a raincoat or umbrella about(换成 with) me. It soon started to rain. Just as I was hurrying home, I heard of (去掉 of) someone calling me from behind. I turn (改成 turned, 过去时态) to have a look and found that he was Liu Wei,
a good neighbor of mine. he offered to share his umbrella with me. We walked all the ways (换成 way) home. With （without 意思是如果没有他的帮助） his help, I wound have got （换成gotten, would have done 虚拟语气）wet to the skin, How thankful I was to（换成for, 对于他的帮助我多么感激) his help!

Answer 3

One afternoon after（改成when） I was on my way home,the weather changed suddenly.Dark clouds were gathered. I began to feel worried because I didn't have both a(改为either) raincoat or
umbrella about（改成with） me. It soon started to rain. Just as I was hurrying home, I heard of （去掉of） someone calling me from（去掉from） behind. I turn（改为turned） to have（改为having）a look and found that he（改成it） was Liu Wei,
a good neighbor of mine. he offered to share his umbrella with me. We walked all the ways home. With（改为without） his help, I wound have got wet to the skin, How thankful I was to（改为for） his help!
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Answer 4

1.were gathered- were gathering.
2. to feel worried - to be worried
3. both a raincoat or umbrella- a raincoat nor an umbrella (两个错误）
4. about me- on me
5. It soon started to rain- it started to rain soon.
6. I turn- I turned
7. ways- way
8. with- without
9. to his help- for his help