Question

英文高手请来帮帮忙

请问下面这段话有没有语病或者表达不清的,帮忙修改一下

Hello！I always wish to join XXXX company.
I graduated from Tianjin university of technical of the year 2006 . At the school time , I learn much expert knowledge , such as Digital electron, Analogue electron, signal and system, C program, principle of communication , structure of data, arithmetic of computer , physical optical, computer network, media, EDA&DSP ,special English etc. Afer my graduation , I learn the construction of oscillometer and the usage method of curren t measure equipment at work time . I aslo have the experience of ERP using . I use to work as a TE , testing the vibration motor of mobile phone , for founding out reason of the badness , and then inprove the production.
All of this from practice to work normally , I was always able to fit in with the job quickly . I believe I can conpetent for Manufacturing Test Engineer . I send both my resume and correlative material . I wish I am the great competitor of this job in your opinion , and I hope that I can receive inform of interview as soon as possible . My mobile phone number：XXXXXXXX
Thank you for reading my letter and considering my applycation .

Answer 1

第一句就不是很好噢，不要用wish比较好。
还有大学的名字，你确定是那样么。。。不是tianjin University of Technology么。
Hello！I always wish to join XXXX company.
I graduated from Tianjin university of technical of the year 2006 （in 2006). At the school time , I learn （have learned/learnt) much expert knowledge , such as Digital electron, Analogue electron(这里你想说什么，应该不会用electron这个词）, signal and system, C program(你是说program designing么）, principle of communication , structure of data, arithmetic of computer , physical optical, computer network, media, EDA&DSP ,special English etc. Afer my graduation , I learn（learnt) the construction of oscillometer and the usage method （method of usage 或只留usage)of current measure equipment at work time . I also have the experience of ERP using . I use(used) to work as a TE , testing the vibration motor of mobile phone , for founding(finding) out reason (reasons) of the badness (errors), and then inprove (improve)the production.
All of this from practice to work normally (properly), I was always able to fit in with the job quickly (???). I believe I can conpetent(compete) for Manufacturing Test Engineer . I send (sent) both my resume and correlative material (related materials/documents). I wish I am the great competitor of this job in your opinion (啊！） , and I hope that I can receive inform of interview as soon as possible . My mobile phone number：XXXXXXXX
Thank you for reading my letter and considering my applycation (application).

那个。。。我真的很难改。。因为有些句子看不懂，不知道你想表达什么，不仅仅是语法错误，这个语义表达不是很好。建议重写。。。no offense.