英语高手请进来!!!!帮忙修改一段英文,直接翻译也行..
帮忙修改一段英文(修改语病,语法错误,把繁复的单词和句子简单化),直接翻译也行!!尽量没有语法错误,单词句子简单点,言简意赅最好了.这是中文:这是爱丽丝在很早以前一个夏日...
帮忙修改一段英文(修改语病,语法错误,把繁复的单词和句子简单化),直接翻译也行!!尽量没有语法错误,单词句子简单点,言简意赅最好了.
这是中文:
这是爱丽丝在很早以前一个夏日里的梦。在这梦的奇境里，白兔戴着白手套，毛虫吸着烟斗……疯了的制帽人和三月兔总是在喝茶，而红桃王后要砍掉每一个人的头…… 这故事很奇怪，可是，在梦境里什么都会发生。
也许你会觉得这样一篇童话对于我这样的年龄显得幼稚，不过，我觉得，只要保持一颗童心，一个精彩的童话世界便会出现在你的眼前，并且能让你明白很多东西。只有纯洁的人们才能进入那样五彩斑斓、天马行空的梦境世界，他们就是生活在美梦与想象中的天使，这里的世界总是那么新奇、有趣。就让我们和爱丽丝一起走进这奇妙的仙境吧！
这是英文:
It's the dream that Alice dreamt in a summer a long time ago.In that strange dream,the rabbit were wearing white gloves,the caterpillar were smoking a pipe...the crazy person who was making hat and March rabbit were always drinking tea.And the queen of hearts wanted to cut down everyone's head...The stroy was very strange,but everything could happen in dreamland.
Perhaps you will think such a fairy tale seems inmature to age such as me, however, I think, so long as keep a childlike innocence, an excellent fairy tale world will appear before you, and can let you understand a lot of things. Only pure people could enter the dreamland worlds of riot of color, powerful and unconstrained style like that, they are angels living in fond dream and imagination, the world here is always so novel, interesting. Let us come into this wonderful fairyland with Alice!
可能有些长,但是事关我的英语演讲啊!!大家帮帮忙!!!我的几乎全部分都悬赏出来了,花点时间,帮我一下吧! 展开
这是中文:
这是爱丽丝在很早以前一个夏日里的梦。在这梦的奇境里，白兔戴着白手套，毛虫吸着烟斗……疯了的制帽人和三月兔总是在喝茶，而红桃王后要砍掉每一个人的头…… 这故事很奇怪，可是，在梦境里什么都会发生。
也许你会觉得这样一篇童话对于我这样的年龄显得幼稚，不过，我觉得，只要保持一颗童心，一个精彩的童话世界便会出现在你的眼前，并且能让你明白很多东西。只有纯洁的人们才能进入那样五彩斑斓、天马行空的梦境世界，他们就是生活在美梦与想象中的天使，这里的世界总是那么新奇、有趣。就让我们和爱丽丝一起走进这奇妙的仙境吧！
这是英文:
It's the dream that Alice dreamt in a summer a long time ago.In that strange dream,the rabbit were wearing white gloves,the caterpillar were smoking a pipe...the crazy person who was making hat and March rabbit were always drinking tea.And the queen of hearts wanted to cut down everyone's head...The stroy was very strange,but everything could happen in dreamland.
Perhaps you will think such a fairy tale seems inmature to age such as me, however, I think, so long as keep a childlike innocence, an excellent fairy tale world will appear before you, and can let you understand a lot of things. Only pure people could enter the dreamland worlds of riot of color, powerful and unconstrained style like that, they are angels living in fond dream and imagination, the world here is always so novel, interesting. Let us come into this wonderful fairyland with Alice!
可能有些长,但是事关我的英语演讲啊!!大家帮帮忙!!!我的几乎全部分都悬赏出来了,花点时间,帮我一下吧! 展开
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It's a dream that Alice dreamt in a summer long time ago.In this strange dream,the rabbit was wearing white gloves,and the caterpillars were smoking pipes... the crazy hat-making person and March Rabbit were always drinking tea. While the Hearts Queen desired to cut down everyone's head...This stroy was very strange,but everything could happen in dreamland.
Perhaps you may think such a fairy tale seems a little childish to adult,like me, however, I still believe, as long as keeping a childlike innocence, a wonderful fairy tale world will appear in your mind, which could teach you somethings. Only those who have pure heart could enter this dreamland where full of colors and wild imagination. Angelas just meet those requirement who always live in sweet dream and imagination. The world in their eyes is fantastic and funny forever. Let us come into this amazing fairyland with Alice!
Perhaps you may think such a fairy tale seems a little childish to adult,like me, however, I still believe, as long as keeping a childlike innocence, a wonderful fairy tale world will appear in your mind, which could teach you somethings. Only those who have pure heart could enter this dreamland where full of colors and wild imagination. Angelas just meet those requirement who always live in sweet dream and imagination. The world in their eyes is fantastic and funny forever. Let us come into this amazing fairyland with Alice!
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