假设你是张明,即将初中毕业。你的美国好友Jack发来e-mail询问你的暑假计划。请你给他回复一封e-mail,告
假设你是张明,即将初中毕业。你的美国好友Jack发来e-mail询问你的暑假计划。请你给他回复一封e-mail,告诉他你的假期计划。注意:1.至少要写出你在假期打算做的三...
假设你是张明,即将初中毕业。你的美国好友Jack发来e-mail询问你的暑假计划。请你给他回复一封e-mail,告诉他你的假期计划。注意:1.至少要写出你在假期打算做的三件事;2.回信字数要求不少于80词。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;4. 所给提示词语仅供参考。参考词汇:Summer vacation, relax oneself, visit, travel , read, volunteer, housework, play sports
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Hi, Jack, the summer vacation is coming soon .I want to have a relaxing summer vacation. I feel tired this term so I want to relax myself. First, I will visit Beijing with my parents. We will go there by train .Second, I want to read some English books. Our teacher tells us about some famous English books. I want to read them .Third, I am going to be a volunteer .I want to do things for others .Fourth, I will also stay at home to help mother do some housework, and do some sports. How will you spend your holiday? Best wishes! Yours, Zhang Ming |
试题分析:这是一篇命题作文。题中已经给出了相关的信息和要求,写作时要注意不要遗漏要点,可充分使用参考词汇。注意文章的时态,因为是对将来的打算,所以可采用一般将来时。写作时尤其注意主谓和时态的正确。可适当使用一些连词来增加文章的逻辑性,使文章更通顺流畅。 【亮点分析】这篇短文结构完整,要点齐全,表达准确流畅。文章使用了很多实用的表达方式,例如:文章使用了一些序列first, second,third,fourth,使文章的结构非常清楚;want to do sth.想做某事;tell sb. about sth,告诉某人某事; 文中也使用了一般将来时的表达,如will, be going to等。 |
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