写作思路:要直接简化任务语言。在叙述中,我们要把直接叙述变成间接叙述,尽可能简化人物语言。这样,即使情节连贯,又使语句“简练”。
I went to an English Summer Camp this summer vacation. It's really a good chance to improve my English.
I ate, lived, learnt and played with my foreign teachers and my classmates for about three weeks. In the morning, we had a four-hour-class.
In the afternoon, sometimes we saw an English movie, otherwise we learned some English songs.
In the evening, we had our free time. We all had a lot of fun.
译文:
今年暑假我去了一个英语夏令营。这真是一个提高我英语水平的好机会。
我和我的外教和同学一起吃、一起生活、一起学习、一起玩了大约三个星期。早上,我们上了四个小时的课。
下午,我们有时看英语电影,有时学英语歌曲。
晚上,我们有空闲时间。我们都玩得很开心。
warm and sunny. The people were friendly. We went to lots of parks. We went swimming. We took a lot
of photos there. I enjoyed myself very rnuch. I hope I can go there again.
2016-05-02
我也是找的,望采纳