Question

短文改错，每行一个错，帮帮我..

my parents and i went to the park last sunday.
there were lots of visitor standing in front of the ticket
window .we waited a long time and buy three tickets.
in the tiger mountain of the park , i was too eager
to see the fierce frightened animals that i quickened
my steps through the crowd. unfortunate.i got
separated from my parents. i had hard time looking
for them , and i had no luck .wandering in the pafk ,i felt
alone without any companions. worse still , i had no money,
so i had to walk to home ,covering as much as 5 kilometers.

Answer 1

第一行sunday首字母改成大写，即Sunday，星期首字母要大写。
第二行lots of visitor中的visitor加s,即改成visitors，可数名词复数。
第三行buy改成bought，动词过去式。
第四行too改成so，和后面的that从句构成so... that...结构。
第五行frightened去掉前面已经有恐怖的，凶残的，这个词是受惊的，就多余了。
第六行Unfortunate改成Unfortunately，副词作状语。
第七行had hard time改成had a hard time，固定用法，渡过艰难时刻。
第八行and 改成but，和前面是转折关系，不是并列关系。
第九行alone改成lonely，即孤独的意思。
第十行walk to home改成walk home，home前面不能加介词to,因为home是副词，回家的意思，所以前面不能用介词to.

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