根据情景，写一段不少于60字的短文，要内容贴切，意思连贯。
Thestudentsofyourclassarewaitingattheschoolgate.youaregoingtotakeaone-daytriptoShesha...
The students of your class are waiting at the school gate.you are going to take a one-day trip to Sheshan.
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Today, our class visited Sheshan.Early in the moring, we were waiting at the school gate.We felt so excited to take the one-day trip to Shanghai Observatory.
We went there by bus.It took us two hours to arrived at the foot of the mountain.Although the mountain is not so large, it's the only one in Shanghai. After we climbed up to the top of the hill,It was all so vaguely outlined and that I wanted to take everything in. Luckily, two perspective glasses stand by. We could take everything into our eyes with the help of the telescope.
Getting out of the astronomical observatory, we went diredtly to the Catholic Church.As soon sa we stepped into the gate,we could saw the famous painting "The Last Supper".
Sheshan is not very big, but it's a great palce. We all like there.
Today, our class visited Sheshan.Early in the moring, we were waiting at the school gate.We felt so excited to take the one-day trip to Shanghai Observatory.
We went there by bus.It took us two hours to arrived at the foot of the mountain.Although the mountain is not so large, it's the only one in Shanghai. After we climbed up to the top of the hill,It was all so vaguely outlined and that I wanted to take everything in. Luckily, two perspective glasses stand by. We could take everything into our eyes with the help of the telescope.
Getting out of the astronomical observatory, we went diredtly to the Catholic Church.As soon sa we stepped into the gate,we could saw the famous painting "The Last Supper".
Sheshan is not very big, but it's a great palce. We all like there.
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