英语作文怎么写才能得到高分？
写作思路：简述中西方教育的差异，写出自己的观点，表达出自己对于现代教育的关切。
正文：
Western education is a kind of trial education, let students try first, accumulate experience and draw conclusions from it, and get their own research results. Western education attaches importance to people-oriented, which is conducive to the cultivation of students' innovative ability.
西方教育是一种尝试教育，先让学生尝试，从中积累经验得出结论，得到的属于自己研究的成果。西方教育重视以人为本，利于培养学生创新能力。
Chinese education is a kind of indoctrinated examination oriented education, which directly tells the students of adult experience, so that they can remember and accept it. Results the students lack of innovative thinking.
中国教育是一种灌输式应试教育，直接把成人的经验告知学生，让学生记住并接受。结果学生缺乏创新思维。
Western parents cultivate and exercise their children's sense of independence and ability to live independently from an early age. We should attach importance to children's self-training and their free development, and strive to cultivate children into social people who can adapt to various environments and have independent survival ability.
西方家长从小就培养和锻炼孩子的自立意识和独立生活能力。重视孩子从小的自身锻炼，注重孩子的自由发展，努力把孩子培养成为能够适应各种环境，具备独立生存能力的社会人。
Chinese parents, in addition to double concern in life, parents are most concerned about their children's academic achievements. It seems that learning well is omnipotent, but little attention is paid to children's independent living ability, social adaptability, mental health level, moral sentiment and citizen consciousness, and some even ignore it completely.
中国家长，除了生活上加倍关心外，家长最关心的是孩子的学习成绩。似乎学习好就是万能的，而对孩子的独立生活能力、社会适应能力、心理健康程度、道德情操以及公民意识等则关心甚少，有的甚至完全不顾。
From birth to adulthood, parents have almost everything for their
children, such as cooking, washing clothes, cleaning, saving money for
their children to go to university, go abroad, get married, raise
children, etc. Foreign parents pay attention to the Chinese parents'
neglect.
从孩子出生到成年，家长几乎把孩子的一切都包了下来，做饭、洗衣服、打扫、攒钱供孩子读大学、出国、结婚、养儿育女等。外国家长重视的恰恰是中国家长忽视的。
Whether it is school education or family education, we must attach importance to the cultivation of children's ability while paying attention to their academic performance, so that they can adapt to various environments from childhood. Let children have independent thinking, adapt to social changes.
无论是学校教育还是家庭教育，在重视孩子学习成绩的同时，必须重视孩子能力的培养，让他能从小适应各种环境。让孩子拥有独立思考，适应社会各种变化的人。
