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英语 急急急急用！！！！！

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假如你是NICK，请阅读下面这封信，并就信中的问题提出你的建议（提示词：first,then ,next,finally和should ,shouldn't ,could).
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dear frind,
what a terrible day today! this morning i was late for school and my headteacher was angry with me . then i found my math book was missing . since i stayed up late last night,i fell asleep in class this afternoon . i could hardly hear what the teacher said . there will be a good football match on tv tonight , but my monther doesn't want me to watch it. i really don't know what to do . could you please give me some advice?

yours,

peter

Answer 1

dear Peter,
i also think you had a bad day.but the first,i think you should have a good rest at night.then if you can't get up ,you should put a clock on your room.next if you want to watch the football game at night,you should finish your homework first and tell your mum you finish your homework.and you doean't stay up late.
this is my advice.best wishes!
yours,
Nick

Answer 2

dear peter
I am sorry to heart that .But you must do some things chang your badly situation so first you should have good state of mind. Then
you shouldn't go to shoocl late next time and you should go to bed early so that you couldn't sleep in class .It is bad to your lessons . Your math book is missing ,right? Don't wrroy about it .
You should buy anthor one as soon as possible. Finally if you want to watch football match very much . I think you must finish your homework first and you should give good impression on your parents.
That is all ok?
yours
Nick

Answer 3

ok
dear peter:
i'm sorry to hear that
it's really terribly
you can tell your teacher you stayed up late last night,and you have done all your homeworks,you should promis him you will not late for class after
and, you will study harder and harder.
the football match? you wasn't born yesterday! take
care study is the first! care your mum's advice
good good study
day day up!
so much for this !!~~