Question

帮我写一篇英语作文吧，初二水平的

写一篇关于你的好友Mary的短文，字数是60词左右。
提示：1.上周她生病了，写出她应该和不应该怎么做。
2. 本周末学校组织一次旅游活动，她打算去哪里？和谁一起去？准备做些什么？吃些什么？
3.文章所给句子，不记入词数。

Maria was ill last week. She had ______________________________________________
简单点初二水平，感谢

Answer 1

正文：
Mary was ill last week, she had to drink more water,do more rest , and eat some good digestive things. That week at least she no longer can play computer and more time to watch TV. But she was ok now, this week she want to travel, she wants to go to sanya,and swam in the sea. She will go with her parents and sister , they eat fish and seafood.I hope her having fun.
翻译：
玛丽病了上周,她多喝水,多休息,吃一些好的消化的东西。这一周至少她不再能玩电脑和长时间时间看电视。但她现在好了,就在本周,她要去旅游,她想去三亚,在大海里游泳。她将和她的父母和姐姐一起去,一起吃鱼和海鲜,我希望她玩得很开心。

完全照要求写的。

Answer 2

Maria was ill last week. She had a littlecold and to have a headache.She should stay at home and have a good sleep ，because these are be good for her heatlhy.She shouldn’t eat couldfood or be tired.This weekend，our school have a schooltrip .Mmm……She wants to go to a forest with me and a other girl. We put the lotsof foods ， water，and three sleepingbags in our bags.We want to feel nature.Uh，we preparation to eat vagetables ，chestnut cake ， croissant and sausage .Maria should to take notice of her body.Well we will protect her.Please to wish our have a good trip！

汗，写得还凑活凑活吧，仅供参考，毕竟我只是个初一滴娃娃，初二滴作文就当作是我练习咯。

Answer 3

1L写的挺好的，我修改一下吧。
Maria was ill last week. She had to stay at home来替换She had a littlecold and to have a headache.接下来都没问题.This weekend，our school have a schooltrip 这里应该是将来时态This weekend, our school is going to be a school trip. She wants to go to a forest with me and a other girl a other 是another，1L大概打错了。We put the lots of foods ，food为不可数，所以无“s”，lots of 前无"the" 应该为 We will put a lot of food 或We will put lots of food.
we preparation to eat vagetables ，chestnut cake ， croissant and sausage .preparation为名词应该为prepare,前面加上are going to.剩下来的都不用了，就最后一句加上去就可以了。
望LZ采纳1L，毕竟我只是修改，不是原文。

Answer 4

Mary is one of my best friends. She was ill last week. She had a bad headache since she didn't get enough sleep at nights for several days recently. I told her not to sit in front of the computer for too long every day. She should go for a walk so that she can relax herself.
There will be a school trip at this weekend. She plans to go to the West Lake with me and her and other classmates. We will bring with us apples, pears, mineral water, bread suausage etc. We will have a good time. Mary will feel great after this trip.