Question

谁能帮我看看这个英文句子有问题吗 谢谢了！！！！！

Actually, those brilliant artstic masterpieces would never fade out of the
history because the eternal spirits and values inside them which indicate the idea of society have been deeply
carved in the minds of the publics
只是看看有没有语法错误就行了

Answer 1

在because前加个逗号就ok了。语法貌似没有错误。
would fade 和 have been 是描述两个不同的事物，不互相冲突ok的。

Answer 2

为你改了多处，提供完全正确的译文。请对照。
Actually, those brilliant artstic masterpieces will never fade out of history as the eternal spirit and values inside them which embody the idea of society have been deeply carved in the minds of the public.

Answer 3

前半句谓语是would fade……，后半句谓语是have been……
我不太明白你这个时态是怎么变换的，有虚拟的地方吗？

to：vanessaleeac1
这是一句话，时态怎么能不统一呢，我觉得would应该改为will比较合理点，would除了常规词组的用法就是过去时或虚拟时才应该出现的。