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I’m writing in response to your advertisement for a secretary what you advertised on China Daily
of May 19, 2014.
My name is Li Hua, twenty-two years old now, but will soon graduate from Tsinghua University. My major is business management. Had learned English for 10 years, I can use it fairly free now. Besides, I have good knowledge of computers. I have been one of the editor for the student newspaper in our school for 3 years. My grades remained outstanding in my class. The most important thing is that whether I like office work very much. I’m sure I’m qualifying for the position.
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Answer 1

I’m writing in response to your advertisement for a secretary <on> what you advertised on China Daily
<on> May 19, 2014.
My name is Li Hua, twenty-two years old now, but will soon graduate from Tsinghua University. My major is business management. <I have> learned English for 10 years, I can use it fairly free now. Besides, I have good knowledge <for> computers. I have been one of the <editors> <of> the student newspaper in our school for 3 years. My grades <remain> outstanding in my class. The most important thing is that <删去> I like office work very much. I’m sure <I’ll> <qualify> for the position.

Answer 2

secret。 having learnt。去掉whether。qualified

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