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短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语

短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。Dear Brad, I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school. I feel uneasily recently. Athome I feel like prisoner. I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet. Theonly thing I have to do it is studying. Every time I got a low mark, my parents willscold me sharply. There’s a generation gap among my parents and me, but it’salways difficult to communicate. Life are supposed to be colorful and wonderful, isn’t it? How should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as to entering agood university？I am very unhappy and lost. I need your help. Best wishes, Li Ping

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Dear Brad, I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school. I feel uneasily recently. At                                  1. grade                                        2.  uneasy home I feel like∧prisoner. I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet. The                        3. a only thing I have to do it is studying. Every time I got a low mark, my parents will                              4. 去掉                                 5. get scold me sharply. There’s a generation gap among my parents and me, but it’s                                                                  6. between                    7. so/and always difficult to communicate. Life are supposed to be colorful and wonderful,                                                         8. is isn’t it? How should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as to entering a           9. Why                                                                                       10.  enter good university? I am very unhappy and lost. I need your help.                                          Best wishes,                                            Li Ping