求修改演讲稿的语法错误
Iamgladtotellmystory.Infact,it’saspeechthattookmeforalongtime.becauseit’shardtofindmy...
I am glad to tell my story.In fact, it’s a speech that took me for a long time.because it’s hard to find my advantages.The only thing I'm proud of is my curiosity.
When i was a kid , I hardly studied, cause i put all my mind on adventuring in my back garden. as other children learned a lot of theorems and several unintelligible poems, I just learned how to catch a cricket, climb a tree, or talk to a kitten.
Unexpectedly when i grow older, I got to learn physics, math, Chinese literature and kinds of things like that.and i love the feel that i work out a hard problem after several hours’ thinking.under the influence of curiosity,learning is not being driven, but a kind of instinct.and recently I’m crazy about programming.
Curiosity is the only force drives me, it makes me always think out amazing ideas which is being praised, makes me win the math competition, makes me have power to catch the opportunity as I gave up hopes, makes me stand here to tell you these now. 展开
When i was a kid , I hardly studied, cause i put all my mind on adventuring in my back garden. as other children learned a lot of theorems and several unintelligible poems, I just learned how to catch a cricket, climb a tree, or talk to a kitten.
Unexpectedly when i grow older, I got to learn physics, math, Chinese literature and kinds of things like that.and i love the feel that i work out a hard problem after several hours’ thinking.under the influence of curiosity,learning is not being driven, but a kind of instinct.and recently I’m crazy about programming.
Curiosity is the only force drives me, it makes me always think out amazing ideas which is being praised, makes me win the math competition, makes me have power to catch the opportunity as I gave up hopes, makes me stand here to tell you these now. 展开
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写得挺有意思的。 帮你略作修改，供参考：
I'm very glad to be here with you today. I would like to tell you a story of mine. In fact, it took me a long time to prepare for the speech, because presentation is not my strong point.
The only thing I'm most proud of is my curiosity. When I was a kid, I hardly studied because I put my entire mind on venturing in my back garden. As other children learned a lot of theorems and several unintelligible poems, I just learned how to catch a cricket, climb a tree, or talk to a kitten.
Unexpectedly yet unavoidably, when I grow older, I have to learn physics, math, Chinese literature and all kinds of things like that. I love the feeling every time I work out a hard problem after several hours of thinking. Under the influence of curiosity, learning to me is no longer driven by force, but has become a kind of instinct of mine. And recently I'm crazy about programming.
Curiosity is the only force drives me, and it often helps me think out amazing ideas. The ideas sometimes praised by my classmates and even teachers helped me win the math competition, gave me the power to catch the opportunity just as I was giving up on hope, and made me stand here telling you all about it now.
I'm very glad to be here with you today. I would like to tell you a story of mine. In fact, it took me a long time to prepare for the speech, because presentation is not my strong point.
The only thing I'm most proud of is my curiosity. When I was a kid, I hardly studied because I put my entire mind on venturing in my back garden. As other children learned a lot of theorems and several unintelligible poems, I just learned how to catch a cricket, climb a tree, or talk to a kitten.
Unexpectedly yet unavoidably, when I grow older, I have to learn physics, math, Chinese literature and all kinds of things like that. I love the feeling every time I work out a hard problem after several hours of thinking. Under the influence of curiosity, learning to me is no longer driven by force, but has become a kind of instinct of mine. And recently I'm crazy about programming.
Curiosity is the only force drives me, and it often helps me think out amazing ideas. The ideas sometimes praised by my classmates and even teachers helped me win the math competition, gave me the power to catch the opportunity just as I was giving up on hope, and made me stand here telling you all about it now.
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十分感谢！！！请问adventure用在这里不合适是吗？和venturing有何区别吗
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adventure是名词，动词是venture
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