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英语作文 一封道歉信，请大家帮忙修改，顺便评分

Marketing Manager of IBM
Dear Mr Martin Hill:
I am terrible sorry that I failed to reply two lists of quotation for a little while ago the supply of computer keyboard in time. That is owing to the fact that my office was decorated without telling me the exact time. I had to look over the process of decoratetion, and I will continue to look over them in the following several days. So my work was delaied.
I really regret that I haven't reply lists in time, and gave you some inconveniences. I have prepared the two lists to you and will send you it with this letter. Besides, I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology for any inconvenience caused.
Sincerely yours,
paula

Answer 1

Marketing Manager of IBM
Dear Mr Martin Hill:
I am terribly(terrible) sorry that I failed in replying(to reply) two lists of quotation for (a little while ago)the supply of computer keyboard in time a little while ago. That is because of (owing to) the fact that I found my office was decorated without being told(telling me) the exact time. I had to look over the process of decoration(decoratetion), and I (will)continued looking(to look)over them in the following several days. (前面这句表达什么意思？应该用过去时吧）So my work was delayed(delaied).
I really regret that I haven't replied(reply) lists in time, and that I gave you some inconvenience(s). I have prepared the two lists for(to) you and I am sending(will send)(写这封信的时候马上就寄出去了 将来时不合适）it to you (it) with this letter. Besides, I sincerely hope that you can understand me(my situation) and accept my apology for any inconvenience caused.
Sincerely yours,
paula
好歹给点分吧- -

Answer 2

你的英文spelling错了，查一下dictionary把英文字的spelling写对就是了

Answer 3

80分吧！