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英语改错：Last Friday,when Liu Mei and I were on our way to home,an....

Last Friday,when Liu Mei and I were on our way to home,an old women walked in front of us,carrying a basket of apple .The old women fell on the ground all of a sudden,that made her apples go everywhere ! Liu Mei and I hurry to help.I helped the women to sit down to have rest . Liu Mei picked out all the apples and put it into the women's basket.After a while,the women went back home,accompanying by us.The old women was gratefully for our help and thanked us again and again. We were very happy to help him.

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Last Friday,when Liu Mei and I were on our way to home, to去掉，on one's way home 在某人回家的路上
an old women walked in front of us, women 改成woman，一个老女人，单数。
carrying a basket of apple . apple改成apples 一篮子苹果难道就一个？下文也有提示。
The old women fell on the ground all of a sudden,that made her apples go everywhere ! that 改成which，代替前面整个句子
Liu Mei and I hurry to help. hurry改成hurried
I helped the women to sit down to have rest . woman，and have a rest
Liu Mei picked out all the apples and put it into the women's basket.
it改成them woman's
After a while,the women went back home, accompanying by us.
The old women was gratefully for our help and thanked us again and again. （这两句不太地道。如果是写作的话需要换种说法。）
We were very happy to help him. him改成her