Question

帮我看看这几段英文有没有什么错误（我写的）

是几段关于大兴安岭的文字，因为老师要求做课件

1.Green is the spirit of Ta Hsing-an Ling, that is to say, it means life.
The ocean of the trees is the meaning of it, and there are hundreds of animals and thousands of trees living here.
As you see, Ta Hsing-an Ling is just like a paradise of plants, and it is the only pure land now…

2.Blue is the colour of sky and streams.
I’m sure Ta Hsing-an Ling’s blue is more beautiful than a picture. Here in Ta Hsing-an Ling, water hids in forests– but it cannot stop you to find its beauty.
Here are some tourist spot for you:
Yanzhigou (胭脂沟）
It is part of Emu-er River, about 14 km long, and it is famous for its high production capability of gold. It has been known by us for more than 100 years, but you can still find gold here now!
Beiyinquan （北饮泉）
You can drink the water here directly. The water is also good for your health.

3.The time for orange is the time for gains.
If you walk into the forests, you may find thousands of love peas (北国红豆）, persimmons (柿子）and all kinds of precious Chinese herbal medicine.

4.A world in white is a pure world,
Because white is the colour of purity.
Ta Hsing-an Ling’s winter is just a world like this.
You will see the most clean views here.
And will be attracted by this.
The amazing trees, mountains and lakes,
Bring you to the true ice world,
The world like a dream…

谢谢了……好的话我会有追加分的，怕浪费分数……

Answer 1

略作改动，一家之言，谨供参考。

1.The spirit of Ta Hsing-an Ling is green, a color which reminds you vigorous life and immense forest, with hundreds of animals and thousands of trees inside.
When you come here, you will find yourself touring in a paradise of plants and the only pure land at present time......

2.The sky and streams of Ta Hsing-an Ling is blue. It is more beautiful than any pictures. Here in Ta Hsing-an Ling, springs always hide in forest, however, they never stops you to find out their beauty.

Here are some tourist spots for you:
Yanzhigou (胭脂沟）Rouge Valley
As a branch of Emu-er River, this about-14-km-long ravine is very famous for being rich in gold. It has been well-known since 100 years ago, but even now you can still find gold here!
Beiyinquan （北饮泉）Northwards-Drinking Spring
This spring water is drinkable. Of cause, you can enjoy it directly. Tell you a truth ---- It is quite good for your health.

3.The season of harvest is orange.
Rambling into the forest, you will surely be enchanted by so many love peas (北国红豆) and persimmons (柿子) as well as various precious Chinese herbs.

4.The world in white is a pure one,
Because white is the color that represents purity.
Ta Hsing-an Ling in winter is just a world like this.
You will find the cleanest views here,
and will be deeply attracted by them.
The amazing trees, mountains and lakes,
Will bring you into the real ice world,
which is totally like a dream…

Answer 2

还好，没什么大问题
要是加上些高级句子的话就更好了

Answer 3

写的还行！！！！~~~~~