Question

一篇英文作文(关于海滩)，可以点作？！

Answer 1

I went to the beach which had many people there. I went to the seashore
and walked along it. I felt that I was I was so lonely because there were many pair of families in the beach. Then
I went back to the sand and wanted to found some seashells. There were many seashells in colourful colour. They had some dots on it too. They are so beautiful. It was evening. I looked at the sun beeen the sea ant the mountain. The sun needed some rest
I think. Many people went back home. I saw nothing in the sea. I decided to swim for a while. I put on my swimsuit and went to swim immediately. Although the water was cool
it was enjoyable to swim alone. I love going to the beach.
参考: me(绝不能抄袭)
当系120字 第一段
写下时间同你点解要去沙滩。20 第二
三段
记住谂d活动
你觉得开心
唔开心既
最少四样。50 第四段
写回程既经过。10 第五段
写感想。20 够100字 希望帮到你!^^ 2008-06-10 19:38:55 补充： 仲有
加d修饰既句子。 如: The beach is beautigul.I like the bach. 系结尾果度加d野
例如: 我仲想去之类，一定够120字！ 88
参考: 自己
自己
可以描写那个海滩的特别之地方
回忆. 例如: XXOO beach occupy a important position in my memory. 跟着再写一件对你有极大回 忆价值的事件(当然要和海滩有关的!!) 例如: My six years bithday is passed at XXOO beach........... ( ^讲述当时的事^) 最后来个首尾对应!
参考: 自己