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ThedaybeforethespeechcontestmyEnglishteachertalkedtome.Shesaidthatsheandmyschoolmatew...
The day before the speech contest my English teacher talked to me.She said that she and my schoolmate wished me success but it didn'tmatter that I would win or not
When I was on the stage the next day,I felt so nervous that I shook like a leaf.There were so many people present !Suddenly,I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crow. She was smiling but nodding at me.I remembered her words and calmed down,I did a good job and won the first prize.Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library.Whenever I see them I will think of my English teacher
各位 5个地方错了。帮帮忙！！！！ 展开
When I was on the stage the next day,I felt so nervous that I shook like a leaf.There were so many people present !Suddenly,I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crow. She was smiling but nodding at me.I remembered her words and calmed down,I did a good job and won the first prize.Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library.Whenever I see them I will think of my English teacher
各位 5个地方错了。帮帮忙！！！！ 展开
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谈话是双方的，talk to~talk with 不会只有一个同学，schoolmate~schoolmates 在人群里，单词错误，crow~crowed 顺承，不需转折，smiling but nodding: but~and 是复数形式，the prize is hanging: is~are
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