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英文45秒自我介绍！！！谢谢！急！要比赛了！

大家好!我的名字叫Susan.今年14岁了。是一个活泼开朗的小女孩，我的爱好很多，我喜欢弹古筝、跳舞，画画和看书，我的古筝弹得可好了，已考出6级了！我还很喜欢学习，应为学习时会很快乐，我最喜欢吃土豆，那很美味。我还有很多好朋友，和我走过了六年的很快乐时光。希望你们会喜欢我，一个乖巧的小女孩。谢谢！

Answer 1

hello everyone！my name is susan. 14 years old. i am a happay girl which has a lot of hobbies, like playing guzhen, dancing, drawing and reading. at the same time i also like studing since i feel happy while i am studing. my favourite food is potatoes, they are so yummy! i have a lot of friends which have been 6 years wonderful times. i really hope you guys are going to like me who is a clever girl. thank you !

有些地方稍微改动了一下喔~这个比较口语化，演讲的话会比较好。
在英语文化里面，乖巧未必就是好的意思~所以帮你把乖巧的小女孩改成了机灵的小女孩~

追问

很感谢你，但是稿子有了，不知道怎么读，我是要参加希望英语的比赛的。

追答

给你这个网喔~可以查单词的意思，有很多词有教发音的

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Answer 2

Hello everybody! My name is Susan. 14 years old this year. I am a lively and cheerful girl, I love a lot, I like to play the zither, dancing, drawing and reading, my zither plays good, and have pass the test of six! I also like learning,Because I feel happy through it , I like to eat potatoes best, it is delicious. I have many friends which have gone through the happy times with me for six years . I hope you will like me, a well-behaved girl. Thank you!

Answer 3

hello everybody! i am Susan, 14years old now. i was a little girl with postive mentality for life. i got so much interest, such as play 25-stringed instrument, dancing,drawing and reading. the skill of my playing 25-stringed instrument was excellent, also have passed the 6-level yet! what is more, i like studying very much, because it makes me feel very happy. maybe you want know more about me, well, i also like eat patatos, it tastes delicious. i have a lot of good friends, they keep company with me already 6 years. hope you will like me, a lovely little girl. well, this is me. thank you for your listening. 前面开场的话根据场合来说。具体内容就是根据你的汉语写的。祝你好运！！加油........

追问

很感谢你，但是稿子有了，不知道怎么读，我是要参加希望英语的比赛的。

追答

有没有搞错？？不知道怎么读？？？哎..........下一个有道词典吧，读不了的单词就输在里面，有发音，还可以输句子，也可以读的！！

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