Question

英语短文改错题,把下面短文中的错误挑出来并改正，最好有解析！谢谢啦！

There once were a goat and a donkey that lived on a farm. The donkey worked the hardest so the hardest so the farmer fed it the most food. sometime the donkey was given much food than it could eat. this made the goat so jealius that they began plotting against the donkey. "Hey," the goat said one day ,"I thought you do too much work on this farm.You carry such heavy thing from morning to night .Why don't you pretend to get sick but you can take a day off? "The donkey thought it great idea. The next morning, the donkey lay in the stable on its side with its eyes close. Then the farmer sent for a doctor,who said it was needed a special medicine made from the heart of a goat .So the farmer killed the goat and gave the donkey the medicine made from its heart.

Answer 1

第二句多了个“the hardest so”，把它改成："The donkey worked the hardest so the farmer fed it the most food." 下一句“sometime”改成sometimes，some time是某个时候的意思，可是这句子里的意思是由时候，sometimes是正确的意思。然后在“given much food”改成“given much more food”。“much food”本身是错的，语法上的错误，需加个more。 “jealius”应该是jealous，你拼错了。“they began plotting”应该改成“he”。这里只有一只goat所以不能用they，they是指很多只羊。 “I thought”改成"I think"。“You carry such heavy thing from morning to night .Why don't you pretend to get sick but you can take a day off?"里的"thing"改成things，把句号改成逗号。前面那一句本身不是完整的句子，所以把前后两句联在一起会比较好。 “thought it great idea”改成thought it was a great idea。idea是个名词，名词前加个"a"。was是助动词，每个句子里都需要有助动词的。 "who said it was needed" 这里的was多余了。 最后一句，虽然语法上没有说不能用so来开始一个句子，大部分的英语语文教授的人为用so来当开头不太恰当。能把so改成thus之类的词会适当些。thus有因此于是的意思。