Question

这篇作文有没有错误？老师出的一篇文 实在看不出哪有问题

sorry
Dear Bob
how's it going there? It's sunny here .the days get warmer and warmer when spring comes. so I'm going to play football with my friend this afternoon. but now i have to finish my homework. my father is watching TV my mother is busy preparing a good meal for the family
In the future I think I'll be a doctor Because help and heal sick people will make me happy And people will call me“angel in white” that sounds interesting
Yours
这篇作文明天上午 上黑板 所以 请大家最晚等到 明天下午 我一定处理 谢谢大家的帮助

Answer 1

Because helpping and healing the patients will make me happy

Answer 2

应该是语法类的错误比较多
1、应该是How's it going over there或者UP THERE
2、friend改为friends
3、helping and healing
4、天气用whether
5、YOURS 后面应该还有名字，比如TOM什么的
6、helping and healing peopl would make me happy
应该还有几处，但是我只确定看这么多了，希望能帮到你

Answer 3

抱歉
亲爱的鲍伯
要去什么地方？桑尼在这。春天快来了。我要和我的朋友下午去踢足球。但是现在我得写作业。我爸我妈很忙，他们在看电视。我想管医生们叫“白衣天使”，这主意挺好的。
你的丽丽orz

Answer 4

Dear Bob[,]
[H]ow's it going there? It's sunny here .[T]he days [are getting] warmer and warmer [as] spring comes.[The weather is getting warmer as spring comes.] [S]o I'm going to play football with my friend[s] this afternoon[,] but now [I] have to finish my homework. [M]y father is watching TV [and] my mother is busy preparing a good meal for the family[.] In the future I [hope] I'll be a doctor [b]ecause help[ing] and heal[ing] sick people will make me happy[, a]nd people will call me“angel in white”. [T]hat sounds interesting[!]
Yours[,]

Answer 5

很简单嘛， 格式错了。。。。