Question

这篇作文有没有错误？老师出的一篇文 实在看不出哪有问题

sorry
Dear Bob
how's it going there? It's sunny here .the days get warmer and warmer when spring comes. so I'm going to play football with my friend this afternoon. but now i have to finish my homework. my father is watching TV my mother is busy preparing a good meal for the family
In the future I think I'll be a doctor Because help and heal sick people will make me happy And people will call me“angel in white” that sounds interesting
Yours
这篇作文明天上午 上黑板 所以 请大家最晚等到 明天下午 我一定处理 谢谢大家的帮助

Answer 1

您好！很高兴能回答您的问题！^~^
这篇作文一看上去就知道是一封信，因此我发现了以下几点错误：
①新的格式错误，开头的Dear Bob后面要加“，”，后面的 Yours 应写在右下角，并且后面要加“，”在下一行同样的位置写上自己的名字。如：
……（前面的一大堆）
Yours ，
Li Ming
②the days get warmer and warmer when spring comes.
这句话的天气越来越暖不是用the days ，而是用the whether，而whether是不可数名词，因此该为whether后，get后面要加s
③so I'm going to play football with my friend this afternoon.
my friend改为my friends，用复数
④my father is watching TV my mother is busy preparing a good meal for the family .
watching TV my mother应该为watching TV 【and 】my mother
⑤Because help and heal sick people will make me happy
应该为Because helping and healing sick people will make me happy

嗯嗯，我就看到那么多错误，以上就是我的参考答案，希望能对您有一定帮助，谢谢！

Answer 2

句子开头大写
应该是语法类的错误比较多
1、应该是How's it going over there或者UP THERE
2、friend改为friends
3、helping and healing
4、天气用whether
5、YOURS 后面应该还有名字，比如TOM什么的
6、helping and healing peopl would make me happy
新的格式错误，开头的Dear Bob后面要加“，”，后面的 Yours 应写在右下角，并且后面要加“，”在下一行同样的位置写上自己的名字

Answer 3

Dear Bob,
How's it going there? It's sunny here .The days get warmer and warmer when spring comes. So I'm going to play football with my friend this afternoon. But now i have to finish my homework. My father is watching TV and my mother is busy preparing a good meal for the family .
In the future I think I'll be a doctor .Because help and heal sick people will make me happy And people will call me“angel in white” .That sounds interesting
Yours

Answer 4

抱歉
亲爱的鲍伯
怎么是去那里？是晴天这里。白天变暖时春天来了。所以我要和我的朋友玩足球今天下午举行。但现在我必须完成我的作业。我的父亲是我的母亲看电视正忙着为家人准备一顿美餐
在将来，我想我会是个医生，由于医治帮助患病的人能够让我幸福，人们会叫我“白天使”，听起来很有趣

Answer 5

好多错的 the days get warmer and warmer when spring comes the 要大写 football with my friend this afternoon. friend 应用 复数 yours 后面 有名字

Answer 6

是对的，楼主，因为我以前是英语课代表，现在是英语老师，参加过全国56项英语大赛，我能证明，这是对的，没有错