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Tomyopinion,thereareadvantagesanddisadvantagestravelingeitherbyplaneandbytrain.Travel...
To my opinion,there are advantages and disadvantages traveling either by plane andby train.Travel by plane is time-saving ,comfortably,and you can have a good rest on the trip,but it is too expensive .Unless you travel by train, it is not expensive and you can appreciate the beautiful sceneries on both side of the railway.However , it was too crowded and tiame-wasting,and you can take a good raet. So you can see every coin has two sides. You'd better to choos either of them depending on your own interest or economy.
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In my opinion,there are advantages and disadvantages of traveling either by plane or by train.Travelling by plane is time-saving ,comfortable,and you can have a good rest during the trip,but it is too expensive .If you travel by train, it is not expensive and you can appreciate the beautiful sceneries on both sides( 或者把both 改成 either) of the railway.However , it was too crowded and time-wasting,and you can not take a good rest. So you can see every coin has two sides. You'd better choose either of them depending on your own interest and economic condition
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第一句to改为in,by plane andby ,and变成or,接着Travel by plane 中第一个单词家ing,comfortably,中y改为e,it was too crowded 中最后一个词去掉ed,take a good raet,最后单词错误,改为rest,好了,你先用着
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To my opinion,there are both advantages and disadvantages in traveling either by plane or by train.Traveling by plane is time-saving ,comfortably,and you can have a good rest during journey,but it is too expensive. If you travel by train, it is not expensive and you can appreciate beautiful sceneries on both side of the railway, however, it was too crowded and time-wasting, and you cannot take a good rest. Every coin has two sides. You'd better choose either of them depending on your own interest or economic condition.
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in my opinion,there are both advantages and disadvantages in traveling either by plane or by train.Travel by plane is time-saving ,comfortable,and you can have a good rest oduring the trip,however it is too expensive . you could travel by train,The expense is reasonable and you can Enjoy the beautiful scenery in the journey。while , it is so crowded that you wouldn't take a good rest.
every coin has its two sides. You'd better choose either of them taking your own interest and Economic conditions into consideration
every coin has its two sides. You'd better choose either of them taking your own interest and Economic conditions into consideration
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