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I'mamiddleschoolstudent.I'mwritingtotellyoumyproblemwhichhadtroubledmeforalongtime.It... I'm a middle school student.I'm writing to tell you my problem which had troubled me for a long time .It is the relationship between my mother and me .My mother is an university professor ,who works very hardly .She is strict to me,but she is so busy with her work that she finds few time to talk to me .I love her and I do well in my studies ,so I feel a little afraid of her because she loses her temper easily .I don't know how communicate with her .Maybe it's because we have seldom sat down and exchange our feelings and shoughts .I hope we can know more about each other and understand with each other better .How can I do ? Looking forward to your reply 展开
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I'm a middle school student. I'm writing to tell you my problem which (has) troubled me for a long time. It is the relationship between my mother and me. My mother is (a) university professor, who works very (hard). She is strict (with) me, but she is so busy with her work that she finds (little) time to talk to me. I love her and I do well in my studies, (but) I feel a little afraid of her because she loses her temper easily. I don't know how (加入to) communicate with her. Maybe it's because we have seldom sat down and (exchanged) our feelings and thoughts. I hope we can know more about each other and understand (去掉with) each other better. (What) can I do? (Look) forward to your reply.

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I'm writing to tell you about my problem which has troubled me.....
....between my Mother and I.
....works very hard.
She is strict with me.....she finds little time to talk to me.
...Although I lover her and.........but I feel a little....
I don't know how to communicate with her.
May be it's because we seldomly sat down and exchange our feelings and thoughts.
I hope we get to know each other more and able to understand each other better.
How can I do that?
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who works very hardly中hardly 改为 hard
She is strict to me中to改为with
.I don't know how communicate with her中在how后面加to
shoughts应该是你打错了<thoughts>
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had troubled--troubled
hardly--hard
few--little
to-with
so --but
feel-am
how -how to
exchange--exchanged
shoughts-thoughts
how -what
我不知道总共多少个,但应该能找出这些的。
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