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My life
My life is really beautiful. I always believe that everything is hopeful and everyday is full.
But, still have unhappy things happen. And I will never forget the day I have lost myself. Six years ago, it was summer. I went shopping with my family to a place far from my home. When we were going to go home by car .We must passed through an over bridge. My mother walked up the overpass and turned left. And my father turned right to drive the car. First, I followed my father, but he walked so quickly. Then I ran to find my mother. But I couldn’t find her.
I could only wait. At that moment, I was very afraid. And I cried loudly. Many other people looked at me. I stay there without moving until my parents came to find me.
This is the most unforgettable thing in my life.
After that incident, I always follow my parents closely. 展开
My life is really beautiful. I always believe that everything is hopeful and everyday is full.
But, still have unhappy things happen. And I will never forget the day I have lost myself. Six years ago, it was summer. I went shopping with my family to a place far from my home. When we were going to go home by car .We must passed through an over bridge. My mother walked up the overpass and turned left. And my father turned right to drive the car. First, I followed my father, but he walked so quickly. Then I ran to find my mother. But I couldn’t find her.
I could only wait. At that moment, I was very afraid. And I cried loudly. Many other people looked at me. I stay there without moving until my parents came to find me.
This is the most unforgettable thing in my life.
After that incident, I always follow my parents closely. 展开
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My life
My life is really colorful. I always believe that everything is hopeful and everyday is full.
But, unhappy things still happened. And I will never forget the day I have lost myself. Six years ago, it was summer. I went shopping with my family to a place far from my home. When we were going to go home by car ,We must passed through an bridge. My mother walked up the overpass and turned left. And my father turned right to drive the car. First, I followed my father, but he walked so quickly. Then I ran to find my mother. But I couldn’t find her.
I could only wait. At that moment, I was very afraid. And I cried loudly. Many other people looked at me. I stay there without moving until my parents came to find me.
This is the most unforgettable thing in my life.
After that incident, I always follow my parents closely.
My life is really colorful. I always believe that everything is hopeful and everyday is full.
But, unhappy things still happened. And I will never forget the day I have lost myself. Six years ago, it was summer. I went shopping with my family to a place far from my home. When we were going to go home by car ,We must passed through an bridge. My mother walked up the overpass and turned left. And my father turned right to drive the car. First, I followed my father, but he walked so quickly. Then I ran to find my mother. But I couldn’t find her.
I could only wait. At that moment, I was very afraid. And I cried loudly. Many other people looked at me. I stay there without moving until my parents came to find me.
This is the most unforgettable thing in my life.
After that incident, I always follow my parents closely.
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