Question

英语翻译找错，并说说理由，语法

hello,this is express company. there is a shipment from portugal arrived our depot .but here has a address with not clear,can you give me your detailed adress for delivery.your shpt produced customs tariff,so you need pay for the duty then we can deliver it.

Answer 1

1、第一句这句改为hello,this is the express company.名词单数短语在句子中前面要加冠词，前面的hello说明这个快递公司是对方比较熟悉的，加个the表示被介绍的是个被认同的对象。
2、第二句改为there is a shipment from portugal to our depot .固定短语from....to...从...到...
3、第三句改为but it has an address that not clear,can you give me your detailed adress for delivery.here是副词，不能作为has的主语，改成it，代指"the shipment"。not clear 作为an address的补充描述，加个that,使句子成份更明确。
4、第四句改为your shpt produced customs tariff,so you need to pay for the duty then we can deliver it.需要做某事固定短语need to do sth.

Answer 2

这根本就是全篇错误，简直就是一堆垃圾。

Answer 3

简直太多错了！