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随着社会经济的发展，环境问题已成为当今世界的一个热点问题。而企业经济活动是导致环境污染的最重要的原因，随着环境保护意识的加强，环境信息披露的重要性也日益明显，是决定企业实现可持续发展战略的关键因素。
我国正处于环境信息披露的初期阶段，在环境信息披露中还存在着许多问题。本文以此为出发点，对现阶段上市公司环境信息披露中存在的问题进行分析，并在此基础上提出对环境信息披露鉴定思路，旨在提高我国上市公司环境信息披露现状以及规范环境信息的监管机制。
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Answer 1

With the development of social economy, enviromental problems is becoming a hot issue in the world today.The economic activities of enterprise is the most important reason to lead to enviromental pollution. Along with the increasing awareness of enviromental protection, enviromental information disclosure becomes more and more important and turns into the critical factor which decides whether the enterprise could realize the sustainable development strategy.

Our country is in the primary stages of the environment information disclosure, so there still are a lot of problems. This thesis according to the facts, mainly analyzes the problems existing in the environment information disclosure of listed companies at the present stage and put forward the appraisal ideas of the environment information disclosure. This paper aims to improve the environmental information disclosure status of listed companies in China and regulate the supervise mechanism of environment information.

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Answer 2

随着社会经济的发展，环境问题已成为当今世界的一个热点问题。而企业经济活动是导致环境污染的最重要的原因，随着环境保护意识的加强，环境信息披露的重要性也日益明显，是决定企业实现可持续发展战略的关键因素。
我国正处于环境信息披露的初期阶段，在环境信息披露中还存在着许多问题。本文以此为出发点，对现阶段上市公司环境信息披露中存在的问题进行分析，并在此基础上提出对环境信息披露鉴定思路，旨在提高我国上市公司环境信息披露现状以及规范环境信息的监管机制。
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Answer 3

Along with the development of social economy, the environment problems has become a hot issue in today's world. But the most important reason to cause environmental pollution is the enterprise economic activities, with strengthening the environmental protection consciousness, the importance of environmental information are abvious day by day, it's the key factors which decide enterprises to realize the sustainable development strategy.

Our country is in the early stages of the environment information, still exist many problems in environmental information disclosure. This paper tries to present as a starting point,analyzs the environment information disclosure existing problem of the listed company, and based on it to put forward appraisal ideas of environmental information disclosure, aiming at improving the supervision mechanism of listed companies in China for environmental information disclosure status and regulating the environment information .

Answer 4

Along with the development of social economy, the environment problems has become a hot issue in today's world. But the most important reason to cause environmental pollution is the enterprise economic activities, with strengthening the environmental protection consciousness, the importance of environmental information are abvious day by day, it's the key factors which decide enterprises to realize the sustainable development strategy.

Our country is in the early stages of the environment information, still exist many problems in environmental information disclosure. This paper tries to present as a starting point,analyzs the environment information disclosure existing problem of the listed company, and based on it to put forward appraisal ideas of environmental information disclosure, aiming at improving the supervision mechanism of listed companies in China for environmental information disclosure status and regulating the environment information .希望号LZ采纳

Answer 5

标准翻译
With the development of social economy, the problems of environment has become a hot issue in today's world. And the enterprise economic activities are causing environmental pollution is the most important reason, as the environmental protection consciousness to strengthen environmental information disclosure, the importance of increasingly apparent, is decided to enterprises to realize the sustainable development strategy of key factors.
Our country is in the early stages of the environment information release in environmental information disclosure, still exist many problems. This paper tries to present as a starting point, the listed company environment information disclosure existing problems are analyzed, and based on which, some ideas of environmental information disclosure appraisal, aiming at improving the listed companies in China environmental information disclosure status and regulating the environment information supervision mechanism.
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