Question

高分求高手翻译小论文，不要翻译器的错误翻译！！

随着舞台设计的不断进步，各种艺术都在与时俱进，不断创新。各种创新不论是从广度，深度还是高度，都是前所未有的。如今人们已广泛的把多媒体运用在舞台设计中，从而摆脱了传统的戏剧演出模式。传统舞台上的布景与道具结合加上灯光的变换已不能满足观众的视觉感受。多媒体所创造出的虚拟空间与现实舞台空间的结合能带来时间和空间上的变化。在平时的学习和创作中，我对这一表现手法也有着浓厚的兴趣，所以，我想对多媒体设计做深一步的研究和探讨。如何更 的使技术与艺术相结合。怎样把多媒体的虚拟空间更 的结合到现实舞台中，需要全方位的设计舞台的空间结构。在本文中，我主要谈论了有关多媒体在舞台空间设计中的概念及分析，并结合剧目《蓝胡子公爵的城堡》的多媒体设计，进一步研究多媒体在舞台空间设计中如何更 的运用，让多媒体技术融入舞台的方方面面。

关键词：舞台空间设计 多媒体 视觉隐喻 虚拟空间
随着舞台设计的不断进步，各种艺术都在与时俱进，不断创新。各种创新不论是从广度，深度还是高度，都是前所未有的。如今人们已广泛的把多媒体运用在舞台设计中，从而摆脱了传统的戏剧演出模式。传统舞台上的布景与道具结合加上灯光的变换已不能满足观众的视觉感受。多媒体所创造出的虚拟空间与现实舞台空间的结合能带来时间和空间上的变化。在平时的学习和创作中，我对这一表现手法也有着浓厚的兴趣，所以，我想对多媒体设计做深一步的研究和探讨。如何更【好】的使技术与艺术相结合。怎样把多媒体的虚拟空间更【好】的结合到现实舞台中，需要全方位的设计舞台的空间结构。在本文中，我主要谈论了有关多媒体在舞台空间设计中的概念及分析，并结合剧目《蓝胡子公爵的城堡》的多媒体设计，进一步研究多媒体在舞台空间设计中如何更【好】的运用，让多媒体技术融入舞台的方方面面。

关键词：舞台空间设计 多媒体 视觉隐喻 虚拟空间

Answer 1

好了，把分给我啦，累坏我了！！ （注意：歌剧名：蓝胡子公爵的城堡 的翻译不是英文。 ）
With the inovation of stage design , all sorts of art are developing with creation and innovation. Various kinds of innovative either from breadth, depth or height, is unprecedented. Nowadays, people have been widely applied the multimedia database in stage design, which have get out from the traditional drama performance mode. Those Sets,props and the transformation of lights come from traditional stage design will no any longer get the satisfaction of audience. Multimedia created a virtual space and realistic stage space can bring different changes of the time and the space.

In the daily learning and creation, I hold a particulier love of this kind of expression , so, I want to do some deep research and discus multimedia design with you. How to make an efficient combination between technology and art . How to combine the multimedia virtual space more approach to reality stage? We need an overall design stage of the spatial structure. In this article, I mainly present the conception of the application of multimedia in the stage and some of analysis, and combined with the multimedia design of the operas : Duke Biuebeard’s castie, and how did they realited the application of the multimedia desion in their operas, wish the application of multimedia technology through every aspect of the stage design.

Keywords: Stage space design Multi-media Visual metaphor Virtual space

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不好意思，漏了几个字。。帮我稍微修改一下，一定把分给你的。漏掉的字我给你用“【】”标注了，你容易看些，谢谢~~

追答

你好，其实那天晚上我翻译的时候，就发现你缺几个字，当然我也明白缺的是什么字，我早先就主动加进去了呢。刚才对几个表达稍微做了改动，请查收。With the inovation of stage design , all sorts of art are developing with creation and innovation. Various kinds of innovative either from breadth, depth or height are unprecedented. Nowadays, people have been widely applied the multimedia database in stage design, which have get out from the traditional drama performance mode. Those Sets,props and the transformation of lights come from traditional stage design will no longer get the satisfaction of audience. Multimedia created a virtual space and realistic stage space can bring different changes of the time and the space.

In the daily learning and creation, I hold a particulier love of this kind of expression , so, I want to do some deep research and discus multimedia design with you. How to make an efficient combination between technology and art ? How to combine the multimedia virtual space more approach to reality stage? We need an overall design stage of the spatial structure. In this article, I mainly present the conception of the application of multimedia in the stage design and some of analysis, and combined with the multimedia design of the operas : Duke Biuebeard’s castie, and how did they realited the application of the multimedia desion in their operas, wish the application of multimedia technology goes well through every aspect of the stage design.

Keywords: Stage space design Multi-media Visual metaphor Virtual space

Answer 2

我翻译的对吗With the inovation of stage design , all sorts of art are developing with creation and innovation. Various kinds of innovative either from breadth, depth or height, is unprecedented. Nowadays, people have been widely applied the multimedia database in stage design, which have get out from the traditional drama performance mode. Those Sets,props and the transformation of lights come from traditional stage design will no any longer get the satisfaction of audience. Multimedia created a virtual space and realistic stage space can bring different changes of the time and the space.

In the daily learning and creation, I hold a particulier love of this kind of expression , so, I want to do some deep research and discus multimedia design with you. How to make an efficient combination between technology and art . How to combine the multimedia virtual space more approach to reality stage? We need an overall design stage of the spatial structure. In this article, I mainly present the conception of the application of multimedia in the stage and some of analysis, and combined with the multimedia design of the operas : Duke Biuebeard’s castie, and how did they realited the application of the multimedia desion in their operas, wish the application of multimedia technology through every aspect of the stage design.

Keywords: Stage space design Multi-media Visual metaphor Virtual space