Question

改英语病句

I budget my account .I am restless for it because I need much doller .My mother assess my economic case.it’s very acute ,but I belive I am competment.Getting a job is very significance.Consequently I search fot a job in a rush. My father tell me I should work at bank clerk.Due to I need more mony ,I have to get make mony efficiently.
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Answer 1

I am budgeting my account .(我正在预算我的账户，现在进行时)I am restless for it because I need much dollar （我心绪不宁，因为我需要更多的美元。一般现在时）.(美元的单词拼写错)My mother assessed (一般过去时 我妈妈估计了我的经济状况非常严重) my economic case that was very acute ,but I belived I was competent (competent是能胜任的意思)Getting a job was very significant(very 是副词修饰形容词，所以significance改成significant有意义的,虚拟语气，未发生的事用过去时态 但是我相信我可以找一份工作，是很有意义的事情).Consequently I searched for (fot改成for)a job in a rush.（结果我很匆忙地找到了一份工作 一般过去时） My father told me I should work as a (去掉at 改as 加定冠词a)bank clerk(一般过去时 虚拟语气，我爸爸告诉我应该做银行职员).Due to I need more money (钱money),I have to （去掉get ） make money (钱money)efficiently（一般现在时 因为我需要更多的钱，所以不得不尽快地赚到钱）.

Answer 2

I budget my account .I am restless for it because I need much dollar（美元拼写错了）.My mother assess my economic case.it’s very acute ,but I belive I am competment(competent是能胜任的意思).Getting a job is very significance（significant是形容词“有意义的”而不是significance）.Consequently I search fot a job in a rush. My father tell（可数名词单数应该用tells） me I should work at（as "作为"一个银行职员，而不是at） bank clerk.Due to I need more money ,I have to get（get和make重复 建议删掉get） make mony efficiently.