Question

急求各位哥哥姐姐帮写一个高中英语作文、我会加分加分啊！

要求如图、希望能够按照要求没有语法一类的错误基础上再好点就行哈、
嘿嘿、
急求啊！~~~
好的使劲加分。就看各位哥哥姐姐的了。
先写、我先加点、写完写的好再继续加。不过我没太多分了就剩60分了、同情同情我吧！

Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam,
Hello.This is Li Hua from Beijing Xinhua High School.I am writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance to further my study in computer science at your university.I am a girl and was born in June,1993.I am studying in Beijing Xinhua High School and will graduate this June.I study hard and always get an A in all subjects.I get on well with my teachers and classmates.I am ready to help others.I have many interests,such as the network and English.I have an ambition to become an expert on computer science in the future,and your unversity is my best choice where I can achieve it.I strongly hope you can look into my information and give me the chance.Thank you.
My e-mail address is lihua@.sina.com.
Regards

Yours Sincerely
Li Hua

Answer 2

不帮，自己的功课，要自己写，不然这作文的意义就没了。
老师要你学习英文，你让别人帮你写，那岂不是多此一举。

Answer 3

还是自己动手吧，别人都是靠不住的，关键还是自己要有实力啊