Question

10处改错 请纠正

dear mary:
i am sorry to hear that you are not as close with your old friends as you once are. you have to understand that as we grow old we are sometimes not as close to our childhood friend.first try and tell then you feel .if your old school friends in different classes are keeping secrets from you,they are not your real friends.don't worry your old friends if it is making you unhappy .try but make new friends with in the class that you are in .remember your own happy is the most important.

Answer 1

把前一个词换成 括号里的 i am sorry to hear that you are not as<so> close with<to> your old friends as you once are<were>. you have to understand that as we grow old we are sometimes not as<so> close to our childhood friend.first try and tell then <then 换成what>you feel .if your old school friends in different classes are keeping secrets from you,they are not your real friends.don't worry your old friends if<because> it is making《makes》 you unhappy .try but <to>make new friends with<省去》 in the class《加一个so> that you are in .remember your own happy《happiness) is the most important.

Answer 2

第一行： once are----- once were.
二： as we grow old-------- as we grow older , as close to----- as close as , our childhood friend---- our childhood friends, try and tell ---- try to tell
三： then- them.
四：don't worry --- don't worry about , try but make----try to make
五：去掉friends with 的 with , own happy--------own happiness

Answer 3

dear mary:
I am sorry to hear that you are not as （closed） with your old friends as you once （were）. you have to understand that as we grow（older） we are sometimes not as （closed） to our childhood （friends）.first try and tell then you （will feel） .if your old school friends in different classes are keeping secrets from you,they are not your real friends.don't (worry about) your old friends if it is making you unhappy .try （to） make new friends (去掉with) in the class that you are in .remember your own( happiness) is the most important.

输入内容已经达到长度限制还能输入 9999 字