Question

初二英语书面表达

假设你的朋友丹尼斯（Dennis）转到新的学校后给你来信，他说新学校很漂亮，老师对他也很好，但他没有朋友，功课学得也不好，他感到很沮丧。请你（Joe）写一封回信，给他一些建议。字数在80词左右。开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总字数
Dear Dennis,
I'm very happy when Iget your letter.

Keep healthy and happy,you'll have a good time.
Please write to me soon.

Answer 1

Dear Dennis,
I'm very happy when Iget your letter.
Don't be dismayed.Here are some advices.
First you said your new school is very beautiful.I think a nice environment is good for you to make friend.You can make a self-introduction so that other people can know you well.You also actively and say "hello to others.
Then don't worry about your grades.Your teachers are kind for you.You can ask the teacher for help when you had problems.Don't be shy.That's nothing.Why don't you ask your classmate for help?It can not only improve your grades but also let you get on well with your classmate.
In the end,I hope you can make many friends.And scores more and more good

Keep healthy and happy,you'll have a good time.
Please write to me soon.

Answer 2

Dear Dennis,
I am very happy when I get your letter. I got the message that your new school is very beautiful and your teachers are very kind to you.I am glad to hear that.But you said that you have no friends and your lessons are not very well.I know you are depressed now.But do not give up.I think if you open your heart and take an active part in activities you may find friends soon.In my opion you should spend more time in your study.
Keep healthy and happy,you will have a good time.
Please write to me soon.
yours
Joe