Question

英语作文请大家帮我改一下语法错误，用（ ）把错误括起来，满分15分请打分

Now with the development of the society . Happiness is becoming more and more important. The students have different view about the happiness. Some of the students think money lead to happiness because they can buy and do everything if they have enough money. Some of the students think health result in happiness some of students think wealth bring happiness because they can bring their partents to travel all over the world and have spare time. However I think knowledge is the most important thing because knowledge is power and you will do much for mankind. Different people have different views onhappiness . What do you think?

Answer 1

view（s);lead (s);result(s);bring(s);
(bring their partents to travel)该句话 拼写有错误，而且bring ...to...短语的使用也不正确。
will~本人认为用can应该更好O(∩_∩)O~
think 是不及物动词，所以，最后一词应该是think about 或者think of
希望能帮到你，祝学习进步！

首先，我真诚接受“银雪倾城” 给我指出的错误。think是可以做及物动词，但是要有应用条件，一般接从句的时候才用作及物动词吧！迟闷个人这样认为；再一个族码就是英语习惯的问题，通常说：你是怎么看的，怎么认为，用think about 或者think of 的时候还是最常见。大家可以各抒己见。
另外，这位同学文章里用的knowledge is power。个人认为没有错，可以认为是一句俗语了吧！本人是在文章里看过这个用法，自己也用过的。中文就是“知识就是力量”，说的不对的，各位尽管指出！谢谢兆旦哪！

Answer 2

总体很好啦^^(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……
就衫禅像楼上说滴~很多次没注意不哗饥可数名词要接动词单三形式哦~
Students have different viewS about happiness.
knowledge is power。 power--POWERFUL 此处需要形容词
you will do much for mankind。will-can
they can bring their partents(拼写错了) to travel all over the world and have spare time。觉得整句话不怎么对
they can company their parents travelling and enjoy themselves because they can have more spare time.
纠正楼乱塌返上一点~think是可以做及物动词滴~所以最后一句是没错滴~

Answer 3

Now with the development of the society( ,happiness )is becoming more and more important. The students have different( views) (on) the happiness. Some of the students think money( leads) to happiness because (it) can( buy everything or do everything with money )(when) they have enough money. Some of the students think health (contributes to )happiness ,(but other) students think wealth brings happiness because they can (help) their partents to travel all over the world and have spare time. However I think knowledge is the most important thing because knowledge is power and( using it )you will do much for the mankind. Different people have different views on happiness . What do you think?
同学你高中还是初中，如果是初中，写的不凳搜错了。高中的话，还有待提高啊。我也好长时间没碰英语了亏粗迅，不过还有点基础，改的不好的地方见谅。忙考研销此了

Answer 4

Now with the development of society,happiness is becoming more and more important,while students have different views about it.On one hand,some think money leads to happiness because they can buy many things and do everything if they have enough money.On the other hand,some think health results in happiness because they can bring their partents to travel all over the world.However ,I think knowledge is the most important thing.As we all know,
knowledge is power. With this power,mankind will benefit a lot.Different people have different views on happiness . What do you think?

稍腔谈态侍亏微修改了一伍源下，为了文章更通畅

Answer 5

Now with the development of the society . Happiness is becoming more and more important. The students have different （view） about the happiness. Some of the students think money （lead） to happiness because they can buy and do everything if they have enough money. Some of the students think health result in happiness some of students think wealth bring happiness because they can bring their partents to travel all over the world and have （spare） time. However I think knowledge is the most important thing because knowledge is power and you will do much for mankind. Different people have different views onhappiness . What do you think?是初二的吧，写的还不错