Question

SAT语法求助

1.Though best known as a jazz vocalist, he also enjoyed gospel music, whereby he told his manager that he wanted to make a recording of his favorite gospel songs.
这个whereby哪里错了?
2.In 1850 Jim, a black American explorer, discovered in the mountains of the Sierra Nevads a pass soon becoming an important gateway to California gold-rush country.
这里soon becoming错了，但是能给我解释一下这句话什么意思吗？要怎么改？
3.As a student becomes familiar with both early and contemporary American literature, one may notice that traditional stories have influence recent ones.
逗号后面的one错了，怎么改？
4.John is regarded to be one of most talented writers of the late twentieth century.
这里？to be 错了，为什么？

Answer 1

1 whereby在sat中相当于by which 放在这语意不通 2 从句时态错误 改成which soon became 3 one指代不清 sat惯用考点 4 sat默认be regard as 不是to be

Answer 2

1、whereby 是副词吧，放着不合适，他不是连词
2、分析句子结构你能发现没有谓语
3、one没特指，前面说了a student，这里应该找个词能指到a student，one肯定不可以
4、regard 不能to be， regard sb就直接可以了他是个及物动词

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Answer 3

1.是不是逗号应该去掉！！
2.请明确这句话的意思，你会得出答案的！句意是发现一条通道正变成，还是发现通道变成...？所以此处应改成soon become（但我个人还是有些疑问，是不是用which soon became更好）；
3.由于one指不确定的人或物，而此处有a student,故因用he；
4.to be gai改成as 因为搭配是regard as...