Question

请语法好的帮我改下这句话吧 都是有语法错误的 谢啦 请快点啊有点急的

1)Metaphor(隐喻) applied widely in language.
2)It is a language approach which use different words conveys the same meaning.
3)There comes a metaphorical idiom calls"as old as Adam",which express the meaning of "long time ago or ancient".
4)"God bless me"are more populare being used.
5)A mass of metaphors in idioms have deprived from the Bible.
6)The Bible has contributed a great deal of idioms.
翻译一下下面这个句子。
人们吸烟，会有害健康，更严重的可能会引起死亡。而一个到了时间的炸弹也是，会引起一场disaster.
谢了 回答的好有加分

Answer 1

1.metaphor is applied widely in language.
2.It is a language approach which use different words to convey the same meaning.be used to..用于。。。
3.There comes a metaphorical idiom,"as old as Adam",which express the meaning of "long time ago or ancient".原句纯粹是中文式英语
4.It is more popular to use "God bless me".这个语句结构比较常用
5.A mass of metaphors in idioms are deprived from the Bible.a mass of 复数
6.The Bible has contributed greatly to idioms.contribute to 对什么有贡献

翻译：Smoking can lead to generally poor health or even death.
so is a time-up bomb.It will result in a disaster.

Answer 2

1)Metaphor is applied widely in language.（缺少谓语）
2)It is a language approach which uses different words to convey the same meaning.（to do表目的，uses动词单数形式，主语是approach）
3)There comes a metaphorical idiom calls"as old as Adam",which expresses the meaning of "long time ago or ancient".（expresses 用动词单数形式，主语是一句谚语，单数）
4)"God bless me" is more populare being used.（主语为单数）
5)A mass of metaphors in idioms are deprived from the Bible.
6)The Bible has contributed a lot of idioms.（a great deal of 后面要加不可数名词）