Question

修改英语句子，急~

On the one hand,it can make students get closer to the society.Be open to the tourists,it may benefit to cultural communication among people in different languages and countries.

Answer 1

1. on the one hand没错，说成on one hand也可以；
2. Be open to the tourists, it may... → Being open to the tourists, it may...
中间是逗号，所以其前不能是一个单句，可以改成状语
3. benefit to → benefit
benefit可以直接做及物动词，意思是“使...受益”。如果做不及物动词，一般用benefit from/by...“从...中受益”，并没有所谓benefit to...，可以说be beneficial to...
4. in different languages and countries → with different languages and from different countries
用in无法和languages搭配，以修饰people.

Answer 2

On the one hand，此处one 去掉，on one hand 是一方面的意思。
it may benefit to 。。此处to去掉，benefit 做动词表示对**有益不用加to.

Answer 3

On the one hand, it can make students get closer to the society.Be open to tourists, it may benefit to cultural communication among people in different languages and countries.
on the one hand 删去the 固定搭配 may be benefit 其中benefit 为形容词
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