Question

请外贸英语高手帮我翻译一句话,谢谢(汉译英)

我们已经将商业合同传真给你,请签字后传来.因为这是我们第一次合作,所以我必须保证产品质量是最好的,所以价格对于我们也是相当重要的,经过认真核算,我们将以优惠的价格与你成交.
我们在收到传真之后将及时安排给你寄样品,我们也希望在发货前你带着样品来我们工厂验货.

Answer 1

We've sent the contract to you via fax, please sign it and send it back via fax, too. For this is our cooperation first time, we absolutely will ensure the products are of best quality. Thus, it is improtant for us concerning the prices. After a careful calculation, we determined to make the deal with you at a preferable price.

As soon as we receive your fax, we will arrange the delivery of samples, and we hope you may bring the sample to check the products at our factory before we make the shipment.

建议：不要说“这是我们第一次合作，所以我们必须保证产品质量是最好的”，外方会以为你言下之意是不是“如果以后第二次、第三次或者第10次就不是最好的了？”老外喜欢每次都是最好的，你强调这第一次是最好的，这就很画蛇添足。不如改成：我们工厂的产品是同类产品里面质量最稳定最好的。（our products are always of best quality compared to those from other manufacturers. But for this is our first time cooperation, we should give you a preferable price to show our sincerity.)

Answer 2

We have already faxed the commercial contract to you, please fax back to me with your signature. We must assure the quality is the best,for this is our first cooperation,while the price is crucial for us, and we will make the transactions with the most reasonable price after our analysis.
We will prepare for the samples and send to you as soon as possible. And we hope that you can also bring the samples for inspection in our warehouse before shipment.

Answer 3

We have already faxed the commercial contract to you, please fax back to me with your signature. We must assure the quality is the best,for this is our first cooperation,while the price is crucial for us, and we will make the transactions with the most reasonable price after our analysis.
We will prepare for the samples and send to you as soon as possible. And we hope that you can also bring the samples for inspection in our warehouse before shipment.

这个就比较合适！
挺专业的！