Question

求高手帮忙写份英文的自我介绍

我是2011年的应届毕业生，我就读与xx的xx。我学习的专业是xx。
我的家现在在xx，而我的祖籍则是xx。
在学校学习的时候，我们的课程或多或少的接触到了xx。
同时，因为是在军校念书，我在日常生活中也接触到了很多xx方面的知识。在校期间，我担任了班长，排长等职位。所以对xx当中的权利，领导，组织，人事，决策，执行，效率，管理，责任等问题都有或多或少的了解和应用。
在一次偶然的机会下，接触到了xx这门学科，对此产生了一定的兴趣。
通过一段时间的学习和应用，发现xx在实用性，影响力，作用范围乃至对我个人的价值观上，都带来了很大的好处。那年正好我在念大学三年级，于是就选择了考取这门学科的研究生。
在我通过网络，朋友，家人等各方面的了解后，选择了位于我的家乡--xx的，这所有着百年源远历史，与xx齐名的xx大学作为我的奋斗目标。
通过考试，我来到了这里。
希望以后能追随着我尊敬的，知识渊博的导师，在这所历史悠久，底蕴深厚的学校中，学习到更多的知识~

Answer 1

I am 2011 fresh graduate, I study with xx xx. I learn major is xx.
My home now, and in xx my ancestral home is xx.
In school, our course more or less exposure to xx.
Meanwhile, because it is in military schools study in my daily life also came into contact with many xx aspects of knowledge. While at university, I served as a monitor, lieutenant positions. So for xx of rights, leadership, organization, personnel, decision-making, execution, efficiency and management, responsibility and problems are more or less understanding and application.
In the first time the chance next, I came into contact with xx this subject, this has certain interest.
Through a period of study and application, found in practical, xx influence, scope and even on personal values, has brought great benefits. When I was in college, and then choose third grade a pasing in this discipline the graduate students.
In my through the network, friends, family and so on various aspects of understanding, chose located in my hometown -- xx, this all the hundred years history, and source far xx eponymous xx university as my goal.
Pass the exam, I came here.
Hope there will be followed I respect and knowledgeable tutor, in the long history, profound in our school, learn more knowledge ~