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while visiting France, we decide to do some shopping. Not far the hotel there was shop with all kinds of clothing hang up. When we went into the shop, a woman came up and asked that she could help us, so we said that we would like to look around on our own. she looked at us rather strange. Not having found everything we needed,we thanked the woman and was left.Suddenly my husband startde to laugh, pointing to the small sign in English,which read:"DRY-CLEANINGSHOP.As you are a smoker,please don't smoke here."

Answer 1

更正在括号处注明！总共十处错误！

While visiting France, we (decided) to do some shopping. Not far (加入from) the hotel there was (加入a) shop with all kinds of clothing (hanging) up. When we went into the shop, a woman came up and asked (if/whether) she could help us, so we said that we would like to look around on our own. she looked at us rather (strangely). Not having found (anything) we needed, we thanked the woman and (去掉was) left. Suddenly my husband started to laugh, pointing (at) the small sign in English, which read:"DRY-CLEANING SHOP. (If) you are a smoker, please don't smoke here."

Answer 2

共十处错误，但是与楼上的有点不一样哦~

while visiting France, we (decided) to do some shopping. Not far (from) the hotel there was (a) shop with all kinds of clothing (hung) up. When we went into the shop, a woman came up and asked (if/whether) she could help us, so we said that we would like to look around on our own. she looked at us rather (strangeiy). Not having found (anything) we needed,we thanked the woman and（was去掉) left.Suddenly my husband started to laugh, pointing to the small sign in English,which （reads）:"DRY-CLEANINGSHOP.（If）you are a smoker, please don't smoke here."

Answer 3

decided; Not far from the hotel ;there was a shop ; hanging up；asked if；strangely；anything； left；started；which read改为it said；If you are a smoker
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