Question

英语短文改错.下面短文有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

Dear Chairman,
I'm a student from Class 1,Grade 3.I want to join in your club. At school, I study very hardly. I'm always ready to help others. I got along with my classmates but I like to help them with their lessons. I often help the old across the road .On the buses, I often give my seat to others.On weekends ,I usually go to the park pick up rubbish. I want to join a club very much.For one reason，I like to make friend and work with others.For other，I will have more chances to help others. I would be glad if accepting.
Yours,
Li Ping

Answer 1

I'm a student in Class 1,Grade 3.I want to join your club.At school, I study very hard. I'm always ready to help others. I get along with my classmates and I like to help them with their lessons. I often help the old across the road .In the buses,I often give my seats to others.On weekends ,I usually go to the park to pick up rubbish. I want to join a club very much.For one reason，I like to make friends and work with others.For other，I will have more chances to help others .I would be glad if accepted.
我个人觉得应该是这么改的，我也是学生，无意间看到了你提的问题。嘻嘻，望采纳。

Answer 2

Dear Chairman,
I'm a student ， I'm from Class 1,Grade 3.I want to join in your club. At school, I study very hardly. I always ready to help others. I get along with my classmates because I like to help them for their lessons. I often help the olders across the road .On the bus , I often give my seat to others.On weekends ,I usually go to the park to pick up the rubbish. I want to join a club very much.For one reason，I like to make friends and work with others.For other，I will have more chances to help others. I would be glad if accepting.
Yours,
Li Ping
希望可以看的懂，希望可以有所帮助

Answer 3

Dear Chairman,
I'm a student ， I'm from Class 1,Grade 3.I want to join in your club. At school, I study very hardly. I always ready to help others. I get along with my classmates because I like to help them for their lessons. I often help the olders across the road .On the bus , I often give my seat to others.On weekends ,I usually go to the park to pick up the rubbish. I want to join a club very much.For one reason，I like to make friends and work with others.For other，I will have more chances to help others. I would be glad if accepting.
Yours,
Li Ping