Question

假定你是王伟,你的英国笔友David来信问及你们学校在署假期间对学生的.要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封

假定你是王伟,你的英国笔友David来信问及你们学校在署假期间对学生的.要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封电子邮件。 ●家庭安全：小心用火用电,外出时关好门窗；●游泳安全：不独自去游泳，不去河、湖游泳；●交通安全: 过马路要当心，不在马路上玩耍。提示词：electricity(n. 电)注意：1.词数80-100；2．请不耍逐句翻译，可适当发挥；3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；4. 邮件的开头和结尾以为你写好，不计入总词数。

Answer 1

Dear David, Glad to see you e-mail.our school has made many safety rules for us to follow.Let me tell you something about them. We are asked to be careful with electricity when we are using it.It is dangerous to play with fire,for it may couse terrible accidents.we should make sure doors and windows are shut before we leave. Besides,we are not allowed to swim alone,especially in deely rivers or lakes.If we really want to,we must go to the swim pool with our parents or teachers.What’s more,follwing traffic rules is also very important.Everyone should watch out when crossing the road.And our school warn us not play on the road. I think these rules are necessary as safty comes first. Have a good summer holiday! Yours, Wang Wei

试题分析：这是一篇书信，要注意格式。认真阅读材料不要遗漏要点。本文时态是一般现在时，人称为第一人称。写作过程中注意人称和时态保持一致。注意运用连词是语意连贯，具有逻辑性。 【亮点说明】本篇文章采用了大量的短语和句式，为文章增色不少。比如: It is dangerous to play with fire,for it may couse terrible accidents“玩火很危险，因为他很容易引起危险的事故”。What’s more“另外”； make sure“确保”。在学习中要注意总结，将所学局势和短语运用到写作当中去。