
请帮我看看这句话有没有语法错误,如果有请帮忙改正
Iwouldliketotryoutanewfoodwhichwastoldratherdisappointingbyafriendtodeterminewhyitups...
I would like to try out a new food which was told rather disappointing by a friend to determine why it upset her.
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2011-03-23
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I would like to try a new food which is said to be disappointing by my friend so that I can find why it upset her.
或许是这样吧,你不觉得这个句子太冗长了吗,拆开来写比较好,不能只追求长度,明了也是英语写作的一大要点。
或许是这样吧,你不觉得这个句子太冗长了吗,拆开来写比较好,不能只追求长度,明了也是英语写作的一大要点。
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